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Created on 12-31-69
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On August 7th 2008
njakofne
Said :
Notes:
*your over using pronouns
*and if mr. owens is to be a main character, he should be described more. Right now, I'm not even sure he as a face. 0.0
On June 3rd 2008
charissa14
Said :
finish this story!!!! ^^ i loooooove it rawr lol ..... u rlly need to work on it if you ever find the time ... cause it wuld rlly be a shame if you left it unfinished :p
On February 8th 2008
angelofpurity5
Said :
thats ok and this is very good so whenever u post the next chapter kmp k
On February 7th 2008
mooseguy32
Said :
srry for the wait
*your over using pronouns
*and if mr. owens is to be a main character, he should be described more. Right now, I'm not even sure he as a face. 0.0