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Anabelle's Silent Wish
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 Created on 4-12-08
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I was a fairly normal child when I was young. Nothing strange or traumatic. Well except for when I was four.
Being a cute kid no on thought I'd get into trouble, so i wasn't watched closely. We were having a barbeque, so my parents were outside entertaining. There was a slight breeze that ruffled my wavy blonde hair. My mom dressed me up in a frilly lavender dress with a bow in my hair to match. I never let my mom put makeup on me and I never wore my shoes. Ma never made me because she could never find their hiding spots. I was a curious little girl and I was always finding new things to explore.
There was a small park a little ways from our house; past the backyard and under the picket fence. It had two sets of swings and a slide. My cousin, a five-year old brunette, was swinging. I smiled when I saw her; she smiled and waved. I started toward her, but my dress go caught n a bush. I stopped to untangle it. The bushes concealed me since I was so small.
I turned to ask for her help, but when I looked she was gone, the seat still swinging. I couldn't understand, so I went into the forest to finde her. I walked down a path until I heard crying. i turned a corner and saw her. She was sitting in a clearing holdng her left arm, which was dangling uselessly to her side. I heard a growl and saw a huge dog with black fur and black eyes. it was circling the clearing. It leapt forward and bit her leg. She screamed so loud I had to cover my ears.
The dog froze and lifted its ears. Then it backed away from her and stood, a low rumble eminating from its belly. A man stepped out of the brush and walked slowly toward Anabelle, my cousin. She was still crying loudly. THe man went up to her and held her.
"Hush, my little Anabelle, hush." he whispered in her ear. She was whimpering now. He was holding something in his hand; It was a silver dagger. I was frozen to the spot; I didn't know what to do.
"There'll be no more pain my little angel." He looked so sincere.
"Go home!" He yelled to the dog. It took off, growling the whole way.
"No more pain for either of us... Daddy loves you Anabelle." He spoke softly in her ear. The man took the dagger and drove it into her chest. Tears fell from his eyes as he watched her. She gasped as the blood began to flow. Her eyes fluttered; then closed, one last time. he lay her beside him then took the dagger above his heart. He brought it down with silent tears pouring down his face.
I stood frozen. No more Anabelle. The words echoed in my mind. I walked forward; neither of them was moving.
"Anabelle?" My voice was almost inaudible. I went to her side; she didn't move so I shook her.
"Anabelle?" With growing alarm, I shook harder.
"Anabelle!" Tears ran down my cheeks. My hands were stained with blood. Her hair was matted and her dress dyed red. The man's eyes were still open.
"Anabelle!" I screamed at the top of my lungs. The man's eyes bore into my skin, searing it like fire. I had to get away from that stare. I twisted on my heel and felt a sharp pain in my ankle. I sprinted throught the woods, tripping frequently. The image stained my eyelids. Anabelle's blood red dress, my stained hands. and the mans scorching eyes.
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Please Login to post comments| On April 13th 2008 KiTiEwAzHeRe Said : | |
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sounds interesting
kmp plz
thanx
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| On April 12th 2008 rockergirl929 Said : | |
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very good...kmp plz! |
| On April 12th 2008 gikmo9 Said : | |
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ahh! cliffhanger. kmp |
