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Romance Created on 12-27-07 Views(124) Story Rating G

        The next morning Bryan woke up with a major hangover, Allie woke up to the sound of him throwing up all the alcohol he drank the night before. She slowly got on a robe with her slippers and went into the bathroom       “Allie?” Bryan asked “ohh… Bad bad hangover” Bryan moaned then threw up again. Allie rubbed his head and kissed it softly       “Did the doctor say you weren’t going to be able to have another baby?” Bryan asked       Allie nodded as Bryan stood up and wiped off his mouth       “You okay baby? I mean about not having another baby”       Bryan asked as he put toothpaste on his dark blue toothbrush       “Yea, I was upset but I didn’t start cussing at the doctor and threatening her.” Allie laughed       “She deserved every word that I said to her” Bryan told her       “Maybe, but she isn’t the one who messed up my body”       You saying’ that I am?” Bryan said very defending, getting very mad       “I can’t say anything to you anymore!” She yelled almost in a screaming way “I’m going off, I’m taking Oliver with me! GOODBYE!”       She stormed out of the bathroom, put on some clothes, then slammed the bedroom door, and got her baby. She then got into her car and drove away to her old house which is her mom’s house to drop off Oliver.       “Hey dear, what’s wrong? You and Bryan get into another fight?” She asked her daughter       “Yea, the doctor said that I wouldn’t be able to have another kid” Allie started to cry again “Bryan got drunk and yea, this morning, well earlier this morning I guess he had a really bad hangover and he got really upset”       “I’m so sorry sweety” Just as she said “sweetie” Nicole came in       “Hi shishy! AWWW ITS OLIVER!” Nicole exclaimed       “Hey sweets, I miss you” Allie told her little sister       “When am I going to be an aunt again?” Nicole asked as she jumped into her sisters arms       “Honey lets not get on this subject okay” Sarah told her       Nicole nodded her head and jumped down. Allie left and drove over to Taylor and Tanner’s townhouse in the city. Taylor had been put to bedrest since she was almost about to have a little girl. Allie walked into the elevator and pressed level eleven then went to room 1104 and rang the doorbell. Tanner answered behind the door       “GET AWAY” he screamed       Tan its me Allie, Open the door” He opened it and then told her that somebody had been blackmailing them.       “Why don’t you call the police?” Allie asked       “We have, they said that they can’t do anything since no-body has actually threatened us they can’t do anything”       “Tanner baby, who’s there?” Taylor yelled “Bring me something to drink please!”       “Okay sweety! I love the woman but she is soo needy when she has a baby on the way” Tanner went into the kitchen and Allie went up to Taylor and Tanners room.       They started talking when she got a voicemail from Bran. It said
       “Hey baby, I know now you probably hate me but you’ve been gone for almost 5 or 6 hours now, I’m sober now , I’m really sorry about last night babe. Please come home, I really miss you, Bye” BEEP!
       “Aww baby what happened?” Taylor asked       “You know how I wasn’t feeling good and I was throwing up and complaining about my stomach?”       “Yah, what happened”       “Well my ovaries were failing, I could of died, but I wont be able to have anymore kids       “Omg I am so sorry sweetie I am soo sorry” As she said that, she got another voicemail from Bryan
       “I better get going before he goes crazy” Allie laughed
 Allie got into her car and started driving down the road. She turned on the CD that was in the CD player, when she got back to her house she took out herkeys and opened the door       The entire room was covered with rose petals and rose scented candles, There was no lights on only the candles. Bryan was sitting on the couch that was made into the day bed. He was strumming notes on his electric Guitar. Soon he started playing Oliver James’ The Greatest story ever told” and started singing       Allie walked over to him almost in tears and kissed him whispered in his ear that he was forgiven. After they were both sripped and laying on the couch about to start the phone rang.       “Hello” Allie answered very angrily       “Yes this is Dr. Shaper from the hospital”       “Yeah?” Allie replied       “We found a cure. We were wrong for one of the first times but you will be able to have another child”

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On January 2nd 2008 stephroolz Said :
stephroolz kind of confusing, but it's really good! keep me posted.
On December 30th 2007 CassieZ Said :
CassieZ interesting. Im a lil confused about the story line. Keep Me Posted
On December 27th 2007 xashleyrosex Said :
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