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Chapter 5
Romance
 Created on 8-27-07
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(i'm sorry about the one before, I'm sorry that it kinda sucked butt but hopefully this one is better)
Bryan woke earlier than Allie the next morning. She was peacefully sleeping with the blanket covering her body. Bryan slowly got up and put on the boxers from the night before; He went over to his dresser and put on one of his white T-Shirts. When he closed the drawer in his dresser it squeaked and Allie startled “Bryan?” Allie asked sleepily “Yeah” Bryan said “Where are you?” “I’m right here” Bryan said as her went over to her and kissed her lightly on the forehead “Come back to bed baby” Allie said softly “Actually, I was going to fix some breakfast” Bryan told her “ Okay, let me get up and I will help you” “ No. No you don’t have to “ Bryan tried to stop her “ I don’t want to be burned to death if anything catches on fire” She laughed “Hey!!” Bryan laughed with herShe uncovered herself and got a view of Allie’s breasts and Bryan blushed lightly “ What? Its not like you haven’t seen them before” Allie said “True, Hey can you wear one of my shirts?” Bryan asked “Yeah, probably” “Okay, Hey Al, I love you”She nodded and smiled. Bryan went over to his closed and got out a green, blue and pink dress shirt with long sleeves and handed it to her. “ Thanks” Allie said
She pulled it over her head and stood up. It went about 4 inches above her knee line” Bryan had left the room and went downstairs. Allie looked at the clock and it was 9:53. Under the shirt she put on her black thong from before. She went downstairs and into the kitchen and Bryan had out eggs, bread and butter. Allie helped him fix the breakfast. A few minutes later they were eating at the bar in the kitchen.“DING DONG” I got it” Bryan said Bryan got up and went to the door and opened it and there stood Tanner “ Tanner?” Bryan asked in a half whisper. “ What the hell are you doing here?” Just as he said that Allie walked in. “ What’s going on who is…. OH MY FREAKIN’ GOD!!” She screamed “Tanner!!! What the hell are you doing here?” “Well your mom told me to come over and check on you since your cell phone wasn’t on and she didn’t know Bryan’s number and I didn’t expect seeing my cousin in a man’s shirt’ he said without taking a breath Allie blushed “ sorry” she said quietly Tanner nodded and smiled then walked out of the door A little while later Allie went back up to Bryan’s room and got back into the clothes from the night before, “Baby are you leaving” Bryan asked “ Yeah My mom will probably be mad if I stay any longer” “ Okay well I love you baby” “ I love you too” Then she left for home
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On August 29th 2007 jdwluver Said : | |
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very good better then the last one. but last one was good attempt for ur first try. keep up the good work. |
| On August 28th 2007 melibeans10 Said : | |
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i like this one.. but what do u think the mom would expect |
| On August 28th 2007 CassieZ Said : | |
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-nods- this one was better. Nice descriptions. Well written and keep up the good work. And sweety, the last one wasn't terrible but when you want to write a love scence try not to use words like , dick, pussy, clit and such... |
