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+ 2	Breaking The Lines 17
+ 4	Breaking the lines 16
+ 4	Breaking the lines 15
+ 3	Breaking The Lines 14 part 2
+ 3	Breaking The Lines 14
+ 3	Breaking The Lines 13
+ 3	Breaking The Lines 12
+ 5	Breaking The Lines 11
+ 6	Breaking The Lines 10
+ 6	Breaking The Lines 9
+ 3	A Young Life 25
+ 6	Breaking The Lines 8
+ 8	Breaking The Lines 7
+ 7	Breaking the Lines 6
+ 7	Breaking The Lines 5
+ 7	Breaking The Lines 4
+ 5	I'm Pregnant!!!!
+ 6	Breaking the Line 3
+ 8	Ch 2
+ 7	Ch. 1

          “BEEP!!BEEP!!”      Allies alarm clock woke her up on Wednesday morning at 7:30. She slowly got up out of her bed and headed downstairs. It was her first day of her Senior Year in high school.      She got downstairs to the kitchen and then got herself some cereal and juice. Then she sat down at the dining table and started eating, until, her mother came into the room.      “Good morning Dear. Ready for school?” Her mom Sarah laughed      “Yeah, like I’ll ever be ready” Allie’s normally high and cheerful voice was now very groggy and tired.       When Allie was younger she would wake up to pancakes on the first day of school, but now she got her own breakfast. Sarah and Allie started talking a little then Allie finished up her cereal and headed back up stairs for a shower      When she got out she started combing out her dark brown hair and put it up in a ponytail, then put a banana clip through it. Allie put on a black “Rolling Stones” shirt and then a denim mini-skirt. She made sure she had everything in her book bag and was about to put on her mascara when her mother called for her to come downstairs      She hurried to her makeup bag and put on her black mascara and pink lip gloss, grabbed her book bag and purse then headed downstairs. She slipped on some flip-flops and got into the car.      Allie’s 5 year old sister Nicole was sitting in the backseat. Wearing a blue and purple sleeveless shirt with butterflies on it with a pair of blue denim shorts with butterflies on them, and then her own blonde hair was in a ponytail.      ‘Hi Shissy” Nicole greeted happily “Hey, Nikki ready for Kindergarten?” asked Allie      “Yeah!!!” Nicole said in her normal cheerful voice.      Allies mom and dad had divorced when Allie was only 10. In looks she took after her dad, but in personality, her mom. Then a year later her mom got pregnant with Nicole with another man who she is still dating but not married to yet.      A few minutes later they dropped Nicole off at Vance Elementary School. As soon as they got back onto the highway Sarah said this      “Dear, I have something to tell you. Well you know this morning when I wasn’t in the kitchen to greet you. Well I was on the phone with Kaylee, She asked me if Tanner could stay with us and I said yes. Kaylee and Dave are going through some rough stuff and Kaylee didn’t want Dave to hurt Tanner, because sometimes he gets a little aggressive around him and yea. Is that okay? He’ll be coming this weekend”      “Of course mom, I haven’t seen Tanner since 2^nd grade I want to see him again.”      The last time that they saw each other, Tanner had light brown hair and steel blue eyes. They were the same age, and it was hard to keep them apart.      “Well here you go dear, have fun” Sarah laughed.       “Don’t worry I won’t” Allie laughed back “Love ya mom”      She shut the door and then got out her locker number and combination from her purse. She went to her locker and put her stuff up.      “Hey Baby” someone said from behind her, Allie jumped and turned around      “Bryan!!! God you scared me half to death baby” Allie exclaimed and then hit him lightly on the shoulder.       “Aww, I’m sorry Al, I didn’t mean to scare you” Bryan leaned down to kiss Allie on the lips, Allie kissed him back      “I love you” Allie told him      “Gosh get you two a room” Allies friend Taylor said as she walked up to them. They laughed      Bryan was about 6ft 2 inches and Allies was only 5 ft 5in . Bryan had dirty blonde hair that kinda shagged around his ears, with celery green eyes. Right now he was wearing a blue and black striped shirt with some khaki shorts that went to his knees, He looked really hot. Taylor had blonde hair that looked ad if it had been bleached but it hadn’t been, it was natural. With hazel eyes, She was really pretty.      “Hey guys, guess what?” Allie said      “What?” asked Bryan and Taylor together      “Well you know my cousin Tanner right?” Allie asked. They both nodded      “Well he’s going to be staying with me for a while, since his parents are having problems” Allie smiled      “Oh Cool Allie” Taylor said      “Yeah baby, will he come to this school?”      Allie nodded “Were the same age so he should”         “BRING!!BRING!!”

     The bell rang and they all headed in different directions for their classes

 

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