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+ 5	the haunted the final part 6
+ 6	THE HAUNTED PART 5
+ 4	the haunted part 4
+ 9	haunted part 3
+ 6	the haunted part 2
+ 9	the haunted

Aly Juneree stood in front of the cold cobweb covered building how could she be here it was 12:00 why oh why had she bragged nothing could scare her why did'nt she chose to be a wimp like her bff jenny why? The questions kept repeating in her head as she walked up the stairs to the big creepy mansion all of a sudden out of nowhere someone let out a shrill eerie scream. Aly went crazy and ran inside the building into the darkness into eww cobwebs then she heard the scream again louder and louder. Big creepy creaky footsteps started for her she ran tripped and that was the end of her. The next morning her friend Jenny Kellysburg went looking for Aly she climbed the stairs up to the huge old abandoned building opended the doors and expected Aly to jump out and try to scare her but nothing happened. Then she saw Alys bag ahh she is here Jenny thought releiveved then she saw the face of her friend and couldnt believe it Jenny opened her mouth and yelled as loud as she could then quickly she grabbed her cell and called the police."I can't believe shes dead Jenny said to the cops when they arrived me and her and our other friends mallory and samantha were just doing dares last night we dared her to go here i didn't know she would" Jenny trailed off on the word die. The officer comforted her and drove Jenny home when Jenny got home she started balling her eyes out. She couldn't believe it Aly her best friend dead. The cop had asked to talk to Jennys parents Jenny was furious "YEAH DISCUSS MY DEAD FRIEND WITH THEM Jenny yelled very loudly. The cop told the parents to keep Jenny inside for a while. Jenny snuck out through her window and back to the mansion. After a while it begun to get dark out so she went in the mansion it was dark and scary.She began to quiver and shake. I wanna leave I wanna leave she thought but she had to find out why Aly died. But Jenny ran for the door anyways. It was locked!!!! Oh NO im gonna die Jenny thought. All of a sudden she saw Sam and Mallory. They were tied up she went forward and they blew up. Then she heard laughing who would be laughing she thought thats so mean.

 

 

 

 

 

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