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A World of Night

A World of Night

Creative Created on 11-30-07 Views(88) Story Rating G

I was enveloped in the dark. Though it was dim, there seemed to be a soft glow that radiated off of the beautiful, pale stranger. His eyes were as black as coal, the angles on his face perfect. But he looked at me with confusion and sadness somehow distorting them. Sadness washed over me. It was odd how this strangers emotion affected me. I reached out my hand, wanting to comfort him, not attempting to resist the urge, but not sure if it was what I should do. He looked at my hand then at me with a look of pity. He was clutching his hair, and shaking his head. He turned suddenly, walking away. I tried to call after him, but he ignored me. And I tried to run after him, but the faster I moved the more quickly he faded. Suddenly, I was left alone in the blackness

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On February 29th 2008 Laralei Said :
Laralei Vampire stories are always interesting :-)
On November 30th 2007 mkkelsey Said :
mkkelsey yes this is going to be a vampire story people...
On November 30th 2007 username685 Said :
username685 nice vampire i presume?
On November 30th 2007 CaPlanePourToi Said :
CaPlanePourToi Interesting description. Are you going to make a story to this? If so, keep me posted.