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CARK RAY- the meeting

CARK RAY- THE MEETING (PART 2)

Creative Created on 8-7-07 Views(82) Story Rating G

Unbenounced to Steve, cark ray had smelled the blood dripping out of his leg. Cark ray was swimming at top speed, about 80 mph, at the exact moment that cark ray was swimming towards Steve, our hero was playing with the sting rays, "Look at this beautiful creature, she couldnt hurt a fly". At the exact moment he felt a sharp pain in his leg. He thought maybe it was a cramp, until he noticed the large pool of blood around himself. His crew quickly swam to his aid, harpoon guns at the ready. Steve ripped a shred of cloth from his vest and tried to stop the bleeding, it had seemed that it was more then the original cut from the rock was causing the bleeding in his leg, it was the entire calf ripped off like a bite out of a fat persons fried chicken leg.

His crew on the boat noticed a fast moving blip on the radar, they thought it might be a sail fish or such fast moving fish like that, but they were oh so wrong, they radioed down to Steves crew in the water and told them to have their harpoon guns ready, but radio transmission was out of service. So as a safety precaution they brought Steves daughter ashore and went to go let Steve know in person that they were worried what denizen of the deep was after him now.

As the boat was on its way to the spot where Steve was it was hit by a mysterious fog and then ran dry on a reef.

At this time our hero was trying to stop the bleeding and the crew with him were trying to radio the boat, which wasnt supposed to be too far from Steve at any time but went to take his daughter to get some lunch on shore.

The crew was on the boat trying to get off of the reef

"Thank god this fog has lifted", said one "ya you said it it was like it came out of nowhere!", said another.

They finally made it off of the reef only to find that a whole was created in the bottom of the boat. They thought this was from the reef, so they decided to patch it up and go find Steve, but the wierd thing was the fish they saw on the radar was right underneath them and it wasnt moving unless they were.

Steve was finnaly all patched up and decided to go ahead and try to finish the documentary.

Back on the boat the crew was very concerned so they checked they entire ship to see if there was a strange fish aboard the boat. They split up and searched, four men went. Johnny was the youngest and he was checking the area where the hole had appeared figureing there probably wont be anything down there. Tom, Johnny's brother, was in the resting area, which is located very close to the area with the patch, as he was searching the place where they all napped in the day he heard a scream from Johnny. he ran to check it out and the door was jammed shut. "Johnny!?!, JOHNNY!!!","ARE YOU IN THERE BUDDY!?!".

On the top of the boat there was an area hidden and used to carry weapons and tools,the E-room, the entire boat was connected together by the air vents. James checked the E-room he was very nervous and was shaking violently. As he went to check by the shadowed closets he heard a crash behind him. Being already nervous he dropped his flashlight and it rolled and the light bounced off of something in the corner he walked over to get the light and heard another crash, this one was closer than the last. He quickly grabbed his light and shone it on the area the crash came from and saw it. One eye just as the rest of the crew had said, it was hidious and hissing at him he tried to run but it cut him off and attacked!!! His scream was heard from the rest of the crew all over the boat. Four men went down and searched only one came back to the helm. This was Bobby and just as he tried to radio the Coast guard he felt this wettness on the back of his leg and it had a very unique and disgusting odor. it was the head of his dear friend Tom, and as he turned around to see what it was he was over come by the creature and dragged down to a watery grave.

Still hungry cark ray started back to his long since released prey and was ready to finish what it had started all those years ago...

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On August 21st 2007 mjr777 Said :
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On August 19th 2007 kjoy428 Said :
kjoy428 this is even cooler than the first part!
On August 16th 2007 sexyqtpie Said :
sexyqtpie ah! it reminds me of jaws, I love it!
On August 7th 2007 kolorful1khaos Said :
kolorful1khaos this is really good..MORE
On August 7th 2007 melibeans10 Said :
melibeans10 it is really good
On August 7th 2007 demonica666 Said :
demonica666 Wow it makes me want more so keep writting
On August 7th 2007 mjr777 Said :
mjr777 Tell me what you think of part 2 I tried to do my best to please your thirst for more and I think i have given what you wanted