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On June 1st 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess are they in like australia because tyler keeps saying mate?
On February 16th 2008 kimomega Said :
kimomega omg....everyone in the story is a victim...
On February 13th 2008 Vaneeka Said :
Vaneeka Just a few punctuation errors, but we all make those. Um...oh, instead of being really specific, what with the whole, "he already took a shower at six am" thing, try to make it a bit more flexible--give your readers a little room for imagination. Try "he had already taken one about an hour prior, and just settled for some deoderant" or something. But enough with suggestions...Poor Luke! D8 I feel bad for the poor guy... He needs a hug. Definitely needs a hug. *nods*
On February 12th 2008 chayeah22 Said :
chayeah22 POOR LUKE!!! his heart is broken...
On February 12th 2008 DMMgirl Said :
DMMgirl Lol, aaaawwwkwwwaaaard!!
On February 11th 2008 LizWinker93 Said :
LizWinker93 ur real good
On February 11th 2008 musiclover2050 Said :
musiclover2050 kmp please
On February 11th 2008 XSilentNoiseX Said :
XSilentNoiseX oOoOoO!! KMP!!
On February 11th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said :
gotmilk1994 luv it!!! keep me posted as usual!!!
On February 11th 2008 fierygal2010 Said :
fierygal2010 oh geeze.... Keep Me Posted Please (lol of course)
On February 11th 2008 Justawriter Said :
Justawriter aww so sad
On February 11th 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 awww! kmp
On February 11th 2008 omfgusuck12345 Said :
omfgusuck12345 omgahhhh...poor lukee mannn!!!!!!
On February 11th 2008 CrunkkxPunkk Said :
CrunkkxPunkk Awhhhh!
On February 11th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 OmG! I sorta feel bad for Luke... well, don't forget to kmp :)
On February 11th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 OmG! I sorta feel bad for Luke... well, don't forget to kmp :)
On February 11th 2008 Patriciaxox Said :
Patriciaxox weelll talk about bad timinggg. but wat story doesnt have that? :]] lovess itt kmp.
On February 11th 2008 Melanie82092 Said :
Melanie82092 awwwww thats so mean and cruel lol poor luke hehe I LOVE THIS STORY! lol ive only written one story but I try to incorporate myself into it do you do that in your story!?
On February 11th 2008 xPunkxVanityx Said :
xPunkxVanityx awwww... i'm gonna cry. *pouts* kmp please
On February 11th 2008 bcv72 Said :
bcv72 Aww! I like it! kmp!
On February 11th 2008 bcv72 Said :
bcv72 Aww! I like it! kmp!
On February 11th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s awwwwwww bendito....
On February 11th 2008 mitchy8125 Said :
mitchy8125 Lol, tell me what you think!! and if u like it, please rate and comment!! thanks!!