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| On June 1st 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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well then this is gunna get interesting i dont think steph and luke will be friends anymore |
| On February 16th 2008 kimomega Said : | |
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i think that she might be testing him..like to make him actually figure out what he is...gay, strait, or bi..
and in the process she probably does fall in love..
hhhhmmmm |
| On February 13th 2008 Vaneeka Said : | |
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Hi, again, again. ^^ First thing: when you mention the stairs creaking, it's 'creak' not 'creek.' Creek is a river. And I think you meant 'with every step.' You missed the 'every.' Hmm...maybe add in a little more detail (and this could be applied to all chapters, I suppose) and use imagery and similes and metaphors and stuff like that to describe the kiss(es) or feelings and things. Suggestions, suggestions... Other than that, I'm wondering now. Who will he choose? |
| On February 12th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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Awwwww....I feel sorry for him... |
| On February 11th 2008 fierygal2010 Said : | |
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hee hee hee! I knew it!! lol KMPP!!
♥♥♥ |
| On February 11th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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OMG! Yeah, Tyler really has so kinda choice ahead of him lol KMP!!!! :) |
| On February 11th 2008 xPunkxVanityx Said : | |
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poor guy. He's gonna have a tough choice. |
| On February 11th 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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lol kmp... |
| On February 11th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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wel tyler has to choose now and luke wont b happy if he picks stephanie and stephanie wont like it if he picks luke then......uh-o keep me posted please!!!!! |
| On February 11th 2008 melibeans10 Said : | |
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OMG! This is crazy!! |
| On February 11th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Holy crap... |
| On February 11th 2008 musiclover2050 Said : | |
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kmp please |
| On February 11th 2008 Melanie82092 Said : | |
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OMG this boy has a messed up life lol cant wait to see who he picks hehehehheheeheheh I WONDER? ;) OMG KMP!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On February 11th 2008 lvm3932 Said : | |
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umm damn is tyler like hott or something i feel for the dude thats like crazy lmao .... i wonder if he even like look or if he justlikes kissing lmao ...anywho please keep me poested |
| On February 11th 2008 lvm3932 Said : | |
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umm damn is tyler like hott or something i feel for the dude thats like crazy lmao .... i wonder if he even like look or if he justlikes kissing lmao ...anywho please keep me poested |
| On February 11th 2008 CrunkkxPunkk Said : | |
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Wow! |
| On February 11th 2008 LizWinker93 Said : | |
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whoah. i saw it coming tho. but its good |
| On February 11th 2008 mitchy8125 Said : | |
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Its longer this time. well, tell me what you think? i like this chapter =P Sorry to say lukes not in it, but maybe in the seventh chapter!! rate and comment please XD thanks! |


