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| On February 16th 2008 kimomega Said : | |
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omg! that is surprising...and im a hundred purcent with steph! |
| On February 13th 2008 Vaneeka Said : | |
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Hi (again, heh...)! Um, first...after a dialogue, you only capitalize the first letter after it if it's someone's name or if the dialogue ended the sentence. (quick example: Kelsie shrugged, "I don't think so." She turned and left." and "How are you?" he asked. "I'm good," Sally replied.) Um. Oh, and use 'you're' instead of 'your' when it's like 'you are.' Okay! On to the next chapter. ^^ |
| On February 12th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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Yipee! |
| On February 10th 2008 1PanPan Said : | |
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sweet |
| On February 10th 2008 teeniegirl015 Said : | |
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this is rad!!!!! kmp! |
| On February 9th 2008 omfgusuck12345 Said : | |
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i like thiss...its differentt |
| On February 9th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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wow i luv it keep me posted please!!! |
| On February 9th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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wow wow wow! omg, u gotta kmp! Great work! |
| On February 9th 2008 xPunkxVanityx Said : | |
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I am in love with this story! Keep me posted please!!! |
| On February 9th 2008 Melanie82092 Said : | |
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omg i love this story its so freakin awsome lol KMP! |
| On February 9th 2008 musiclover2050 Said : | |
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kmp please |
| On February 9th 2008 CrunkkxPunkk Said : | |
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This story is amazing!
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| On February 9th 2008 LizWinker93 Said : | |
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wow |
| On February 9th 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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wowsers...shock after shock. lol |
| On February 9th 2008 mitchy8125 Said : | |
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3 votes in the first 3 minutes? WOO! |
| On February 9th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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This is awesome! |
| On February 9th 2008 fierygal2010 Said : | |
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i like it! keep me posted please!! |


