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| On February 20th 2008 cashy31196 Said : | |
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omg |
| On February 16th 2008 kimomega Said : | |
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wow!(sorry I read so late..Im off to read all the others!) interesting |
| On February 13th 2008 Vaneeka Said : | |
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Hi again. ^^ If I were you I'd explain who Stephanie is when you introduce her. Like, "It was Stephanie, a senior and the head cheerleader" or something. And then maybe a quick description. "Her brown hair fluttered lightly as she got closer to them" or something. Oh, and don't use little internet shortcuts--it's kind of unprofessional. Like, instead of 'u' use 'you.' Hmm...then it's just a few puncuation errors (oh, and use 'their' instead of 'there' to show possession)...but that's almost nothing. I wonder what Tyler's answer will be! ^^ Must read... >.> |
| On February 12th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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:) |
| On February 10th 2008 1PanPan Said : | |
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sweet |
| On February 9th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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omg luv it!!! |
| On February 9th 2008 xPunkxVanityx Said : | |
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I LOVE it! This is so good! Can't wait for the next one! KMP please! |
| On February 9th 2008 fierygal2010 Said : | |
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wow... thats... wow! keep me posted! |
| On February 9th 2008 Melanie82092 Said : | |
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wow thats a big question to ask someone hehe this is wonderful will you plz KMP! |
| On February 9th 2008 Sk8ncutie001 Said : | |
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omg! Plz kmp! |
| On February 9th 2008 Jumpy1811 Said : | |
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what's he gonna say??? aah! keep me posted!!! |
| On February 9th 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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wow.... kmp! I wanna know what happens! (the anticipation is killing me) |
| On February 9th 2008 musiclover2050 Said : | |
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kmp please |
| On February 9th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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WOW! I wonder what'll happen next! continue to kmp :) |
| On February 9th 2008 mitchy8125 Said : | |
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Thanks for your support guys, there appriciated. Chapter 3 will be out soon. Big chance it will be by today!! |


