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| On June 18th 2008 kassie94 Said : | |
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Nice first chapter. I write stories to and thats a nice first chapter. |
| On June 1st 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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wow thats intense for the first chapter |
| On March 12th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said : | |
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shit! hahah wow thats cool! |
| On March 8th 2008 lazyvampire Said : | |
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hehe lolz.mitchy im righting a message.lolz.good story so far but ilike i out on the ast page.im gonnah bug yah untill youomplete.it and carnt w8 to see whut yah put me ass |
| On March 3rd 2008 stupot08 Said : | |
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its great!!!mitch keep up
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| On February 29th 2008 twilightx28 Said : | |
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Damn! I gotta read this. |
| On February 29th 2008 KimSmallwood Said : | |
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good for Luke. gay guys are the best...but i can understand how creeped out Tyler must be...hah kmp |
| On February 20th 2008 cashy31196 Said : | |
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whoa is all i have to say |
| On February 13th 2008 Vaneeka Said : | |
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Hiya! ^^
Okay, first, where you say "with a faint smile..." Right there? I think you could get rid of the 'with' completely. Just a suggestion. And you started off kind of abruptly. It just goes into them talking. Maybe you could introduce them a bit slower? Start off with Tyler coming out of his house or waking up or something? Other than that, I like it. (From what I've read) not many people post stories like this. ^^ I'll keep reading. |
| On February 12th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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GOOD 4 HIM! YAY! |
| On February 9th 2008 1PanPan Said : | |
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sweet |
| On February 9th 2008 fierygal2010 Said : | |
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wow! i like it keep me posted please! |
| On February 9th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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I like! Keep me posted! |
| On February 9th 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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wowsers das unexpected!!!! =] |
| On February 9th 2008 Jumpy1811 Said : | |
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whoa kmp. |
| On February 9th 2008 Sk8ncutie001 Said : | |
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Woah. Thats uh....So hes in love with Tyler? Anyways kmp! |
| On February 9th 2008 AlexINTJ Said : | |
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Very good start. I like how you ended it. Please notify me when you post the next one up, I'd be glad to read it. |
| On February 9th 2008 kimomega Said : | |
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wow! thats shocking! (I also had a friend, whotold me she was bi, when I moved to another state..It was kinda freaky, since I was her good friend and she had a bf..but she didnt like me like that(yay))
I love it! PLEASE keep me posted!! |
| On February 9th 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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OMG!!! kmp (very surprising) |
| On February 9th 2008 xPunkxVanityx Said : | |
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Gah! This is awesome!!!!!!! Please keep me posted!!!! |
| On February 9th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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wow!!! that was unexpected kmp please |
| On February 9th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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OMG! Whoah! Did see that coming! lol keep me posted! :) |
| On February 9th 2008 mitchy8125 Said : | |
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Tell me what you think. And if you want me to keep you posted, then ask :P Ill be writing more later |


