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Two Months [1] |
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Two Months [Intro/Tester] |
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Unseen [Chapter 4] |
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Unseen [Chapter 3] |
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Unseen [Chapter 2] |
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Unseen [Chapter 1] |
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Fences |
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It's Yours [Chapter 26] |
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I Never Saw Him Coming |
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I Loved Him. [Chapter 4] |
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I Loved Him. [Chapter 3] |
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The Letter |
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I Loved Him. [Chapter 2] |
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It's Yours [Chapter 25] |
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I Loved Him. [Chapter 1] |
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I Loved Him. |
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It's Yours [Chapter 24] |
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Dark Blue: A Romeo and Juliet Story [Chapter 3] |
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It's Yours [Chapter 23] |
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Dark Blue: A Romeo and Juliet Story [Chapter 2] |
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The Day The Cannons Sounded [Chapter 3]Authors Comments: I know it's short. I'm sorry. I'll try to get another chapter up later.
Tragedy
 Created on 9-5-08
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 Story Rating PG
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“I-I read the letter.”
I nodded. The tears had never dried. They were still falling.
“The-the kids are-are at Mom’s.”
“Bring them back.” I whispered.
Hannah looked puzzled. She must have thought that I would have wanted to be alone. She would never understand. I needed them. They were part of Edward. They had Edward’s DNA running in their veins. They had his eyes or his hair or his nose or his fingernails. They were all I had left of him. The kids, the letters, and very soon a folded up flag.
Hannah hadn’t moved to her car or to the phone.
“BRING THEM BACK!” I screamed.
The tears were silent no longer. They were full force. Hannah still wasn’t moving. Or speaking.
“BRING MY CHILDREN BACK GOD DAMMIT!!!!!!”
Silence. Stillness.
“Bring them back.”
Silence. Stillness.
“Bring him back.”
And then the light was gone. I was unconscious once more.
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On September 8th 2008 Khmerfriendz Said : | |
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aw, thats so sad. :'( almost cried. |
| On September 5th 2008 toni2006 Said : | |
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i love it hmmm i wonder why she fell unconcious |
| On September 5th 2008 CassieZ Said : | |
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hmm. why was she unconscious? :( this is sad, this was also a lil short but still good, you can really feel the emotion. nice job :) |
