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Romance Created on 1-16-08 Views(87) Story Rating G

[I have written a new story called "FRIEND FOREVER? OR NEVER?" and also i have "LOVE IS WAR"  please check those stories out to they are just as good as finding love is!!]]

 

I jumped into adam's car yelling at him to hurry up.*coalm down serenity.where are we going?*

*To the hospital now drive!* I yelled.

*Why?*

*Because aaron is in a coma.*

*what?*

*just drive!*

We sat in the car in silence.I tried to cry silently but some whimpers occasionaly escaped.*Do you love him?*

*huh?*

*do you love him serenity?*Adam turned and looked at me.I shook my head yes and i saw hurt fill his eyes.We never said a word the rest of the way.

1 HOUR LATER

i rushed into the hosipital adam trailing slowly behind me.I ran up to the nurse at the front desk.*Mam do you know the room aaron is in?*

*Last name please?*

*Belangia.*

*room 666*

Great i thought.Not only is that like the worst number it was on the 6th floor.i rushed over to the elevator.*Serenity slow down.*

*walk faster then!*The elevator slammed shut just as adam got his foot through the door.We were the only ones in it.*What floor?*

*6th* i yelled.

*you dont have to scream.

*Sorry im just so worried.*

*I dont see why you care anyway i hope he dies.*Adam whispered under his breathe.

*what was that?*I glared at him.

*Nothing*

*listen i know you dont like aaron but get over it i love him and you and i dont feel like choosing between you to.*

*What do you mean you "love" me?*

*like a friend duh what do you think?*

*nothing.*

The elevator stopped at the floor and i ran out.*661.662....665*I whispered under my breathe.*666!* i ran in and began to cry.There he was lying motionless.He had a bandage around his head and a sing on his left arm and a cast on his right leg.*aaron* i cried.i walked over to him and touched his hand.*oh my god. im so sorry*i whispered. I pulled a chair up and watched him as more tears trickled down my face.

 

[[okay sorry it was a lil bit short but how bout a story from adam p.o.v?? well if i get um lets say 5 votes on this one  i will post the next one in adams p.o.v!! dont forget to check out the other stories i wrote!! thanks love,kris-kris]]

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On January 30th 2008 Lemonkiss7 Said :
Lemonkiss7 awesome i liek it keep me posted!! *sorry for not reading i have been REAL busy* sorry =(
On January 20th 2008 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 Wow that's so sad. This story is great!
On January 18th 2008 kinkybitch101 Said :
kinkybitch101 omg i love it...kmp
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On January 17th 2008 odieeido Said :
odieeido awesome keep me posted
On January 17th 2008 odieeido Said :
odieeido awesome keep me posted