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Searching for love
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 Created on 7-29-08
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 Story Rating G
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We know finding love is not easy now and days find a guy think your in love then they say they love you some thing happens then they leave you . wondering whats wrong with your self.You overdose your self with medication. Just to get rid of the pain you have in your empty heart. Thats the story of a 16 year old girl who has trouble making friends.Her name is kayleene anderia she has a extremelly beautiful mother, muscaler breath taking father and a outgoing handsome brother. She lives in the busy streets of barclona spain. As she walks in the halls at school she see's couples holding hands , laughing to geather a true meracle she swears she 'll never get to experience. Shs walks with her head down eyes to the ground trying to think what she would ever do if she found anybody who cared for her. She stops at the soda machine to get a bottle of water when a handsome taned boy with blonde hair a brown eyes walks up behind her and taps her on the shoulder." Hey my name is joshua edwards Ive walked these halls a few times and always notices you are walking alone why! dont u have any friends he looks at her with concern?"" No i......i........i....dont she slurds""How come""well i am not a very outgoing person i have a hard time thinking of things to say and when i do i cant force myself to sy it"" ohh" she looks at him with hope her eyes examine his muscaler body going straight up to his gerogus eyes then back down again day dreaming of how a realtionship would work if they got to geather.she just stares into his eyes while he stares back at her deep blue eyes almost as if he is trying to find a sceret she has hidden beneath her."yea well i guess i'll see you around'''' ok umm hey whats your named he replys as quick as she starts to step away?''" kaylenne she says so softly almost as if it was meant to be a wispher" ok see you around kaylenne"" cya" she says and heads down the hall to her criminal justice class looks behind her and see's him standing there still staring towards her she blushes a little and walks into her classroom. Plzz rate read and comment tell me if i should keep on going i was bored and wnted to add a story so yea
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Please Login to post comments| On November 20th 2008 lov3suck5 Said : | |
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I say continue...I really enjoyed reading it and I wanna know wat happens lol |
| On September 21st 2008 sexiigurl1994 Said : | |
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i love it....keep writing |
| On September 11th 2008 ceropegia Said : | |
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The start of the story and meeting of girl and boy is romantic...
Try to write more details...WHAT NEXT? |
| On August 17th 2008 Exavolt1 Said : | |
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I can agree with Geo,but it is a nice begining to a story.....if you want to continue with it-go ahead! |
| On August 9th 2008 GeonnStwci Said : | |
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The grammar wasn't magnificent, but you can go back and edit that with a simple spell checker. Overall, the story seems like it has a nice beginning. Here's a little tip from one writer to another, if the story screams to you to be written, write it. You don't need other people's go-ahead. Keep it up. |
| On August 2nd 2008 blackwingedemo Said : | |
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This is so what love is all about! |
