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Say you love me *5* the end!

Creative Created on 11-14-07 Views(99) Story Rating G

Nick Pulled up to his house he put the gun in that same place that he had before and he made his way inside. Melissa stood up and looked at him she knew that Travis had told him.

 

“Hey baby did you have fun.” She said trying to ignore the look on his face.

 

“Tears started streaming down Nicks face.

 

“You’re a whore,” he whispered

 

“I was drunk I didn’t know what I was doing. I’m sorry.

 

“Sorry?? I loved you but now I cant stand you I want you dead just like your fuck buddy.

 

Nick Pulled out the gun and pointed it to Melissa’s head. She began to cry.

 

“Nick I…”

 

“Shut Up all I wanted was for you to love me. But that’s to hard for a slut like you!”

 

"NO! Please let me go I won't tell anyone please..."

    Melissa cried as a large man stood in front of her pointing a gun to her head. At this moment Melissa though about her life and how much she would change if was given a second chance she looked into the dark green eyes of her boyfriend, she though about how bad she treated him and how far she had pushed him. At that moment she heard a loud noise then everything went black.

When Melissa woke up she was in a ambulance. She looked at the man sitting next to her and she asked

“What Happen?”

“You passed out when the man that was with you shot himself.”

“Is he?”

“Yes he’s dead the police need to ask you some questions.”

She stepped outside of the ambulance and looked at the body bag she felt tears in her eyes as the policeman walked up to her to ask her questions. She told the man everything she cheated, he found out, he killed Travis and he was going to kill her and she didn’t know why he back out. After talking to the cop she relies why he couldn’t do it. After every thing he still loved her.

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On November 20th 2007 MisterBean Said :
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Good job on your story! Keep it up ~_^
On November 18th 2007 BlackHeartedMe Said :
BlackHeartedMe Awww. that's sad.
On November 15th 2007 Ash94leigh Said :
Ash94leigh Thats sweet and sad at the same time
On November 14th 2007 WaitingAlone Said :
WaitingAlone awww omg! thats so sad.