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Creative Created on 11-13-07 Views(79) Story Rating G

It was time to go to the bar Travis was sitting at the table waiting for Nick. He sat there thinking about what he was going to say, how Nick would react and why he was even telling him.

 

Travis’s Thoughts

 

I can’t do this I’ll call Nick and tell him I couldn’t make it I just can’t tell him.

 

Right when Travis was getting up Nick walked in, he looked around and saw Travis. He walked over to where Travis was standing.

 

“Where are you going?”

“No where”

“Ok so lets talk”

“Talk who said we need to talk?”

“Well if we don’t talk this meeting would have been for nothing”

“I have something to tell you”

 

Melissa Thoughts

 

I wonder where Nick is…maybe he left me a message on my phone.

 

1 New Voice Message

RING…RING…

 Hey Melissa I’m going to the bar with Travis after work.

 He wants to spend time together. Ill be home around

Nine byes love ya.

 

What the hell is he doing? Is he going to tell Nick? I have to stop him but what bar? Ill just have to wait and hope he’s not going to tell Nick.

 

Back to Nick And Travis

 

“Well tell me!”

“Melissa was at my house last night, we had some beer and”

“And?”

“We had sex… we were really drunk and we didn’t… um its not my fault…

I’m sorry.”

“ I understand, Hey man maybe we should meet at your place and drink some more there so we wont have to worry about a ride home.”

“Yeah ok”

They left the bar and headed to Travis’s house. Nick in his car and Travis in his own.

Nicks car

 

He opened the dashboard and pulled out his gun. He pulled up to Travis’s house and put half of the gun in his pant and the other half under his shirt. When they got inside Nick sat down and Travis handed him a beer.

 

“Nick I thought you were going to be mad but I’m glad that you understand

Melissa is a no good slut! And that you should dump her ass on the street.”

 

At this point Nick could no longer stand the site of this traitor. The man that was suppose to be there for him. He pulled out the gun and pointed it to Travis’s leg he shot and laughed as Travis laid on the floor crying in pain he then shot his other leg and bent down to whisper in Travis’s ear.

 

“This is what you get I thought I could trust you. Now I have to kill Melissa.”

 

He shot Travis in the head and walked out to his car. He was going to get her for being such a slut, for not loving him like he loved her all he wanted her to say that she loved him. He gave her everything he had and she goes and has sex with his best friend she was going to pay with her life.

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On November 13th 2007 WaitingAlone Said :
WaitingAlone OMG!!!