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Say You Love Me(intro)

Creative Created on 11-8-07 Views(120) Story Rating G

"NO! please let me go i won't tell anyone please..."

    Melissa cried as a large man stood in front of her pointing a gun to her head. At this moment Melissa though about her life and how much she would change if was given a second chance she looked into the dark green eyes of her ex boyfriend,she though about how bad she treated him and how far she had pushed him. at that moment she heard a loud noise then everything went black..

*tell me what you think just trying the whole writing thing out* 

 

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On November 9th 2007 Ash94leigh Said :
Ash94leigh Interesting I really want to know what happens
On November 8th 2007 minie1pookie Said :
minie1pookie thought not though sorry=)
On November 8th 2007 DarkestFayte Said :
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Keep the rest of 'em coming =)