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Love Of A Lifetime *Chapter 55*

Drama Created on 7-18-08 Views(297) Story Rating G

 

I held my breath as Dr. Neilson continued to speak.

“The car was hit on the driver side” I grabbed Brie’s hand and squeezed it tightly and she did the same. “Mr. Perry was driving, he broke 5 ribs, both of his lungs collapsed, and he has major trauma to the head.” he continued “We repaired the lungs and ribs but there is no telling when or if he will ever wake up.” I covered my mouth in shock trying to keep myself from screaming. At this point I could hardly feel my right hand because I was squeezing Brie’s so hard. “Tyson Hallex and Tessa Martin were in the back seat of the car at the time, Mr. Hallex was on the driver’s side of the car and has a major concussion and had a lot of internal bleeding but we were able to fix it and he is in stable condition.” I was relieved to here that Tyson would be okay but my thoughts were now circulating around Tessa and Landon.

“And Tessa?” Brielle spoke up. Dr. Neilson looked down at the ground.

“I am very sorry but she did not make it” he said slowly. My eyes widened as the tear rolled down my face. I was silent and scarcely breathing; Brielle broke down into hysterics and shook her head not believing what she had just heard. My world melted away. How could this happen? My world had come to a complete stop as the doctor said those words everything around me became muffled and blurry. This must be a dream; this can’t be happening it just can’t. A nurse came to our side as Brie was on her knees on the floor still crying. Brayden handed Evan who was now somewhat awake to the nurse and dropped to the floor to comfort Brie. The nurse bounced Evan up and down trying to calm him as he now started to cry and kick at being in someone else’s arms. I got up and took him from the nurse then walked down the hall. I had no idea where I was going; my mind was completely blank I felt as if I wasn’t even there at all.

“Lany?” Evan said touching my face. Everything came rushing back to me. I sat down on the ground with Evan and began to cry there was nothing I could do to stop the tears from coming. Evan looked at me with a sad face “Lany onay?” (onay = okay) he said, he kissed my tear stained cheeks “All better” he smiled weakly.

“I wish it was that easy buddy” I patted his back. I walked back to the waiting room where Brie and regained control of herself. I handed Evan back to Brayden. I held Brie’s hand as the doctor came back over to us.

“Again I am very sorry for you loss” he said patting Brielle’s knee. “I don’t know if knowing this will help but she did not suffer. It was quick and over in an instant” Tears flowed from both mine and Brie’s eyes.

“When will Tyson be awake?” Brie asked.

“Within a few hours the Anastasia should ware off” he told us.

“Can I… Can I see Landon?” I asked choking back my tears.

“He is in room 177” he told me before getting up and leaving. I asked Brayden to watch Evan I did not want Evan to see his dad like this. I didn’t even know if I wanted to see his dad like this. I asked Brielle to come with me and she held my hand as we walked down the hall towards Landon’s room. As we reached the door I paused not sure if I could go in.

“I will be right here with you” Brie reassured.

“Thank you” I sniffed back my tears.

 

(Okay so i hope you all arnt too mad at me, i could never get rid of Landon. i have grown close to my characters and i couldnt bring myself to kill him off. so anyway i am not going to be able to get any new chapters up untill monday i have to go to work and i dont get service where i work and i dont get back till sunday evening. sorry =[ but there is much more to come)

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On August 8th 2008 sweetmedebe Said :
sweetmedebe omg. tears to my eyes again!!
On July 31st 2008 bowzlady1 Said :
bowzlady1 sad about tessa... but GO LANDON he made it!!! im glad yu ddnt kill him, ive grown to love his character 2!!!
On July 28th 2008 anbo123 Said :
anbo123 noooooooooooooo. but wait you just said you couldn't kill landon so that means he will live yay
On July 20th 2008 rumcake2daend Said :
rumcake2daend omg will he go into a coma and will lacey have to raise evan omfg TESSA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On July 20th 2008 FruitcakeCaz Said :
FruitcakeCaz omg!! kmpp
On July 19th 2008 nickynicole901 Said :
nickynicole901 omg!! kmp!!..i say exactaly what irwinwe says..its a rly good story..i LOVE it!!!!!!!!
On July 19th 2008 irwinwe Said :
irwinwe this is so great! i mean not great...but you know...lol well written. i feel awful about tessa, so weird that she was the one not on the driver's side and yet she was the one to die. but fate's a bitch sometimes, eh? hopefully landon will be alright...he has to wake up! how amazing would it be if she and evan bonded in the time before he regains (if he regains) consciousness, and she ends up loving him like a mother would love a son? that would be kinda cool :) okay i'm being too analytical and i'm writing a tome on your comments lol. awesome story though...can't wait til you post a new one! kmp!
On July 18th 2008 theBuzzingBee Said :
theBuzzingBee Omg! kmpp!
On July 18th 2008 thatchickunew Said :
thatchickunew omg! thats alot to tke in! lol....landon better wake up! kmp plz!!
On July 18th 2008 albanianvukaj Said :
albanianvukaj omg.. kmp please
On July 18th 2008 kikidoodle6 Said :
kikidoodle6 thanx alot aha. im leaving for vacation tomorow and you almost kill landon beofre i leave. i alomost cried aha. still kmp.
On July 18th 2008 raetakeninluv1 Said :
raetakeninluv1 kmp
On July 18th 2008 suicidalcowgrl Said :
suicidalcowgrl Aww.... this is so sad. But a great story. kmpp
On July 18th 2008 mysterywhateve Said :
mysterywhateve This is a good twist and I'm glad he's not dying! please continue to keep me posted!
On July 18th 2008 Patriciaxox Said :
Patriciaxox Ahhh shucks that sucks. Keep me posted.
On July 18th 2008 vegxjen Said :
vegxjen awww. sad.
keep me posted =]
On July 18th 2008 TyffaniKnott Said :
TyffaniKnott GREAT!!! PLEASE KMP!!!!! BESIDES LANDON IS TO SEXY OF A CHARACTER TO KILL OFF.
On July 18th 2008 monkey892 Said :
monkey892 OMG thank god you wont let him die!!!!!! I am crying now. THis is serious! I LOVE IT I'M ADDICTED!!
On July 18th 2008 crazypoet10701 Said :
crazypoet10701 omg im about 2 cry!!! kmp!
On July 18th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess UGH! i hope theres more! and i cant believe that tessa died, tyson will be devastated!!!!!!!! and i hope that Landon wakes up soon and that he is ok. I cant believe that someone had to go and hit them *tear*
On July 18th 2008 JasmineMCRmy Said :
JasmineMCRmy n e ways kmpp! and no u cannot kill him off lol! jk kmpp! na i'll jus suscribed! i love ur work! lol
On July 18th 2008 1lanoche19 Said :
1lanoche19 i like this