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Six Flags 2

Romance Created on 6-28-07 Views(266) Story Rating G

            When the ride chaos, was over, Tyler, was holding my hand. The ride manger, came by and unlocked, the beat, the kept us from falling out. I let go of Tyler’s hand as I got out the cart, all of us slide our flip-flops on, and grabbed our sunglasses and cell phones. “Where too now?” I asked as we left the ride.

            “Mind eraser...” holly said.

            “Ok sounds good to me,” Camilla said.

            We walked around; to the line of the mind eraser, the line was HUGE! Therefore, we decided to go on the batman ride, which was right next to it. Kristen and I are batman buddies, so we rode together. The ride was fun, but I couldn’t stop thinking about Tyler. When the ride was over, we did the same thing from when chaos was done, grabbed our flip-flops, and grabbed our cell phone. We close enough to some of the water rides, we decided we would do those, and wait for the mind eraser line to die down. After the water ride, we went on twister 2. I went with Holly, on this one. Before we even took off, I asked holly, “Does your brother have a girlfriend?”

            “No, they just broke up a few weeks ago, why?” she asked as the ride started.

            “He’s cute, and I kinda like him,” I said right before I screamed.
            The rest of the ride, we didn’t talk, we just screamed. When the ride was over, I got out, holly followed, me. Tyler had put our cell phones a place where no one could find them. He grabbed them and handed me mine. I flipped it open because I saw that I had a text message. “hey, you look great, I hope your starting to like me in the same way I'm starting to like you, if you don’t know who this is, think about, it,”

            I knew who it was from but I didn’t really say anything right away, as we walked down, the ramp, to go to side minder, this ride was probably my favorite, because you go both forwards and backwards. “Who wants to go alone?” Kristen asked.

            “Ill go alone, I love this one,” I answered.

            “No, ill go alone,” Tyler, said, as we got closer to front of the line.

            “No its ok, I don’t mind,” I said, as the ride manger, came up and said, “it will be a few minutes before the next ride, someone threw up”

            I sat down on the stair because I knew it was gonna be a while, Tyler, sat down next to me, while Camilla, Kristen, Holly, sat down on the stairs behind us. The ride manger, and the 3 older guys who were in line behind us, started talking about the throw up. “What color is it?” one guy asked.

            “Oh, I don’t know but I can find out,”

            The convocation went on and on, finally when the ride manger, came back, he said, “If you anyone can guess what color the throw up is, I will give them, an extra ride.”

            “Yellow,” yelled one person.

            “Brown” shouted another.

            “Orange,” said one of the guys said, from behind us.

            “That’s its, orange,” the manger, said.

            “Well, that’s one thing I didn’t need to know,” I added to the convocation.

            “Can we talk about something else?” Holly asked.

            “We can talk about how fucking hot it is,” Tyler said.

            “How about we don’t, I'm already thirsty, I don’t need to crave water anymore then I already am,” I said.

            “Well someone could go get the water bottles,” Tyler said, looking back at Holly, Kristen, and Camilla.

            “After this, we will go get lunch, since, Camilla, and Holly, are starving,” I said, “so no one has to go get the waters…yet.”

            It seemed to take forever for them to clean up the throw up, but I didn’t really, care, Tyler and I were talking. I finally got the chance to text back, I said, “I know who this is, because I'm sitting right next to you, and yes I am starting to like you, a lot.”

            Soon the ride manger came back, and said, “The throw up is clean, but the dispatcher, on the other side is asleep, so we are trying to wake him up right now, it will be a few minutes.”

            At this point we stood, but and got ready. But it was taking longer then they thought, when they were about to take off, they saw something was wrong with the motor, they said, it was going to be at least another 30 minutes, and we had already been waiting for 45, we decided we would come back, and ride it later.

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