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Six Flags

Romance Created on 6-27-07 Views(230) Story Rating G

Six flags, the day at six flags with best friends, and Holly’s stepbrother. Kristen, my best friend, since, the beginning of the school year, and I had it all planned out, we would go on every ride, we could, we couldn’t wait for the batman ride, its kiddy, but we had inside jokes about batman and robin. The second morning of summer vacation, Kristen call, and said, “get dressed we are going to six flags! We will be there in about 15 minutes.”

            “Ok,” I said getting out of bed, and getting my sunset bikini, slide on my white tank top, and boy shorts.

            I ran down stairs, to get something to eat, and my sunscreen. I smoothed the sunscreen all over my body, I couldn’t wait to go, this would be the first memory over the summer. We met Camilla, Holly, and her stepbrother Tyler, at the front gate, I have met every other sibling of Holly’s but not Tyler, he was about 5’7, with a prep look, and his hair looked great! When holly introduces us he seemed a little nervous, so I felt somewhat bad for him, he was stuck at six flags, with four girls, for the whole day. As we went through the gates, to get in our bags were checked, like always, and when we walked out of the entrance, there were people standing there waiting to take our picture, none of us wanted, it because we could have just taken the picture ourselves. Camilla, Kristen, and I when we get together, we can get a little crazy. We needed a locker, because none of us wanted to carry these bags all day, we walked over to the water park. Paid the 12 bucks for the locker, which is way to much, but it was the only one that would fit all of our bags. “Ok, now that that’s done lets go to the swing ride first!” Camilla said with excitement.

            “Yeah!” I added.

            “Ok, let’s go,” Kristen, said.

            As we walked to the swing ride, which was not too far, we filled the walk with meaningless convocations, about summer, clothes, and Holly’s sunburn. We didn’t feel like walking all the way through, the line, so we just went under, there was no line so it wasn’t a big deal. We got on ride, and again had meaningless convections, about who knows what. When we had to get off we went over to chaos, which was a ride, where we went in circles, and then the cars flipped around. There was only 2 people per cart, so I felt bad having to make Tyler go alone, “I don’t mind going alone, if you want to go with holly or someone,” I said was we waiting in line.

            “I don’t mind going alone,” holly added.

            “Same here” Kristen said.

            “Yeah, I love this ride so if you don’t want to go alone I will,” Camilla said.

            “Ill go alone on this one, we will trade off on who goes alone,” holly said taking charge.

            “Ok, ill go with Tyler,” I said.

            “Then it’s me and Camilla,” Kristen added.

            When we got in to the carts, ours were right next to each other, Tyler, said, “I'm scared,” like he would on every other ride, but he wasn’t really. As the ride went up, higher and higher, and we became to spin, and flip, I screamed when we went completely upside down, I had opened my eyes, and it freaked me out. Tyler, said, “Its ok, I got you” and suddenly I felt safe.

             There’s more the come

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On July 2nd 2007 ray7chel Said :
ray7chel ahh, this is good.
On June 27th 2007 performer4evr Said :
performer4evr kewl
On June 27th 2007 jdwluver Said :
jdwluver i like this a lot and if u r going to write more keep me posted please!!!! :) thanks
On June 27th 2007 lvm3932 Said :
lvm3932 i like it alot its so like sweet but like a 15 old life lol
On June 27th 2007 beachparty57 Said :
beachparty57 this is pretty good. I like it. are you going to write more on the story? If you are keep me posted!