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Wait! I'm not ready! continued
Romance
 Created on 12-25-06
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I felt so nervous. The doorbell rang.
Me: Oh Hi *Grinning*
Tyler: Hey! Ready to go?
Me: Yep!
We got in the car and drove to the movies. We watched a scary movie. I didnt think it was all that scary. Tyler kept trying to kiss me, everytime he would I would avoid it. When the movie was over we walked to the car. He pushed me against the car door and started making out with me. Then a couple of seniors started to cheer him on. I tried so hard to pull away. He asked me how it felt. I just turned my head and got in the car. The whole ride home I faced the window. When we pulled in he strangely followed me. He followed me inside. He started to pull my shirt up. I screamed for him to stop, but he wasnt backing down. I started to cry. I Cried and cried, he pushed me to the couch. He made me lay down. He tried to pull my pants off but i kicked. He managed to get my shirt off. (Lucky i wear bras!) He went for my bra.
*More to come!*
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Please Login to post comments| On July 12th 2007 PiCkLeS7912 Said : | |
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You really need more detail and conversation. This is very general - "We watched a scary movie. I didn't think it was all that scary." You should have added more details about the theater. And when did all these seniors suddenly get into the picture?? Wouldn't the neighbors notice him trying to rape you??? This is all very confuzzling!! |
| On March 10th 2007 lilgirl1690 Said : | |
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ok def. need to improve on making them longer and more detailed |
| On December 26th 2006 melovesbob Said : | |
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i like it RACHEL |
