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Wait! I'm not ready!
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I walked across the hall. There was my Best friend. Taylor! She always cheered me up when I was down.
Taylor: Hey! What's up Kara?
Me: Nothin much. I cant wait til Saturday.
Taylor: I know, I'm sooo excited for you!
Me: I'm a little nervous. *I looked down at my feet*
Taylor: Dont worry, You'll be fine!
Taylor always had a lot of confidence. She had no reason not to, she has perfect blonde hair and pretty blue eyes. Thats why shes my Best Friend!
Saturday came all too quickly. I was going out with the hottest guy in the school. Tyler. He is sooo sweet. We were going to a movie. I was home alone all night. My parents were at work from 6 pm to 9 am.
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| On July 12th 2007 PiCkLeS7912 Said : | |
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So she's your best friend because she has straight blonde hair and blue eyes??? Umm okay them. I'm not trying to be mean, either. But it should be longer and have more details... |
| On January 28th 2007 CrazyGirl65 Said : | |
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Not being rude, but I hate it. The other person is right. You should make your story's longer. Don't leave your readers lost and confused. I would like to know what is going to happen next in this story. Again..I'm not trying to be mean. |
| On December 25th 2006 nesser101face Said : | |
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ok sorry but that was gay u should add on to it! |


