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Sempiternal, The Vampire Who Stole My Sister (Ch2) Revised

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Created on 1-21-08

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Tamy stood at the edge of a cliff and looked down to see the water thunder against the towering wall of rock. The wind swept her dark hair in her face and strands caught to her wet cheek.

"Think how easy it would be, " she said to herself, " just to jump and end this life." She kicked a rock and watched it plumit into the water.

She took a deep breath and closed her eyes. She spread her arms wide and leaned forward.

I shot forward and grabbed her arm before she fell and pulled her back to safty away from the edge. I held her to the ground and she struggled to push me off.

"Let me go Karsea!" Her voice was strained in her effort to get me off.

"Not untill you get some since into your head." I told her as I flipped her onto her stomache and twisted her arms behind her back. I lifted her to feet and forced her to walk into the forset to our house. "You know you have to stop doing this some time right?"

"He was my life," she sobbed, "I can't live with out him!"

"That's what you said about Fred, Drew, Kaylob-"

"But they were all diff-"

"Right...all sevinteen."

"Eighteen."

"Eighteen," I corrected, " anyways, you need to learn to get over a boy better."

"How do you know? You've never...had...a..."

I released her arms and stared in aww. Parked beside our house was an expensive looking car. It was blacker then black and looked fast. The windows were tinted so dark that I could not see through them.

"Wow, what is this?" Tamy asked not blincking. The car seemed as if it had taken her mind off of Paul.

"Well, since it has 4 wheels, an engine and a steering wheel, I would guess that it was a-"

"Don't be sar... sar... sarcastic..."

"I followed her eyes to the most handsome man I had ever seen, but there was somting about him, Something I didn't like.

I walked over to my sister and stood infront of her. She didn't seem to reject to my jester. She could apparently feel the same thing I did.

"Who are you," I asked my eyes narrowing into slits.

"My name, ladies, is Sempiternal." he said with a slight bow. "I have been waiting for you and you sister Tamy for quite a long time."

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On February 9th 2008 individulsong Said :

	That's gotta be.... interesting..... having a stranger just come up and charm you like that.... gah!

On February 3rd 2008 Skyler53 Said :

	nice, please keep working

On January 23rd 2008 twilight8218 Said :

	glad you revised it... makes a lot more sense... I love it!

On January 23rd 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :

	oh v good also very creepy!

On January 21st 2008 groupielove Said :

	OOh im kind of confused maybe I'm going to read the one before this again. Keep me posted

On January 21st 2008 luvsanhugs01 Said :

	This is really good! Can't wait to read more.

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