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Losted Friends
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 Created on 2-18-07
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Lost Friends
“We have been calling your name over and over where could you be?” Dorothea screamed inside of her.
“OK where are you , hello? Oh Dorothea! Wait where are the others?” Jerrica asked in confusing voice.
“Help” a whispered noise slowly found its way to the lost young teenagers. Despised all the racket that was still going on she, Dorothea, heard that faint sound.
“Wait do you hear that? That sounds like it is coming from over here…” Dorothea and Jerrica follow the whisper to a large crack between where the healthy green grass starts to turn into brown dusty dirt.
All of a sudden the ground started to rumble, worst this time.
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On February 18th 2007 lilgirl1690 Said : | |
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great opening paragraph to a chapter..finish it out i got a feeling it will be good...i will read it when u get done.. |
| On February 18th 2007 onaipwolf Said : | |
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It's a good start. You should write the first chapter. |
| On February 18th 2007 lonercc Said : | |
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this is the very very frist part so its not even a chapter but still :D |
