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The power within us ~10~

Tragedy Created on 7-11-08 Views(16) Story Rating PG

The whiteness was all around me ... and then i saw the musky shillouete creep slowly towards me.It reached out a

shadowy hand which i grasped and held on tight.

I could`nt speak as an amazing wind current was pummeling my shadow self . I was journeying with my ghost brother to the deepest pit between worlds.Hells pit.

All too soon the winds stopped and apparently so did we though it felt like we were still moving at the speed of light through time and space itself.

I heard a whisered goodbye and suddenly colour came flushing back into my eyes. I felt amazing like i had been re-born in a new sense of things.  I looked around taking in the dark surroundings...

 

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On August 1st 2008 Firedragon307 Said :
Firedragon307 continue =D kmp kmp
On July 11th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 sorry its so short only limited amount of time to do it in please tell me if you want me to continue with this story or cancel and start a new one xx