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the power within us ~9~

Tragedy Created on 3-2-08 Views(30) Story Rating G

sorry it took so long but i had a slight case of writers block but here it is the power within us numba 9


I looked at oliver as he reached into his back pocket and pulled out a shining silver blade.I breathed in abruptly shocked at the idea of what we were about to do.

"Ill go first seeing as im the only one who knows what to do here when you reach the whiteness wait untill you see a black shadow come towards you when it reaches out for you take it`s hand, it will be me ill take you inside and then we will have to wait." Instructed Oliver

I nodded grimly, on glancing at Julie i noticed she was very pale and looked as if she might swoon.

"Julie are you ok, you dont have to go through with this you know." I reasured her.

But she swallowed and despite of how she felt personally she knew that her beloved James was inside and needed her .Hay who knew maybe after all this was over theiy might get together.Or theiy might not...

"Im not going now Im in."She sighed bravely

"Lilly? Im going now." said my brother.

I ran to him and we embraced for what we knew would be the last time.

"Goodbye Oli, ill miss you after this is over." i whispered.

"And i you sis but remember ill meet you again....one day."

before i had time to ask why he had thrust the knife into his chest he screamed out in pain...then he was silent i watched as his body slowly lost all heat then i picked up the knife.

"Julie you have to go first to make sure you make it wait with oliver, Ill meet you their."

Without another word and a face full of concentration she took the knife from my hand and pushed it into her heart.Sheyelled in pain and then she too was gone.

Then it was my go.

I concentrated on mark and holding the knife in my hand the life was taken from me too.The blade pushed its way through my flesh and mussels ripping the arteries.Then whiteness....

 

 

 

 

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On April 8th 2008 lilemoannie Said :
lilemoannie omg lollidols mrs z wud be proud i thought yuuh never listened in science
On March 25th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 hay leave comments and vote please!
On March 16th 2008 chelseaprice12 Said :
chelseaprice12 ohh, awesome!!! KMP lease! =]
On March 9th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 leave comments oh n tell me wot you think lol again soz it took so long but i had writers block and i have been spending time talking to my great bpyfriend anyway gtg cuzin problems lol cyarr