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Tragedy Created on 2-7-08 Views(49) Story Rating G

the blue glow then seeped around marks body,pulling him into hells pit.The crack started closing as soon as mark was in i screames as marks body fell further and furter down he was screaming too 

"LILLY DONT FOLLOW ME I LOVE YOU!"

Their was no way anyone would get away with this even the devil.My body shook with emotian at the thought of what tortures mark and James would enjure in hell.Julie was crying,she loved james as much as i loved mark i could tell from the look of fear in her eyes.

"Lilly what can we do?" she screamed.

"i dont know WAIT thats it!"i yelled as my idea popped into my head like a flower springing up in june.

"Julie hold my hand and chant this...."

As i whispered the incantation under my breath a white glow and a green glow came around my own hands and julies.The glow faded.

"ok now follow me" i said while gesturing for julie to put her hand on the ground where the crack had been.

"farafushka,vatikaundderashtu mayomai and Amiah our guardian names expose the true us the power united we make the world DIVIDED!"We yelled and sure enough the ground started rumbling and the crack reapeared this time it was near hells gate so rocks abruptly came jutting out of the side leading downwards in the shape of staires towrds hells gate.

We both took a deep breath and placed our size four and size seven feet on the steps to hell.

We walked and walked for what seemed like miles the smell of sulphur filling our noses and the heat rising with every step we took.Eventually we reached hells gate which was in the shape of satan`s horns and tail with barbed wire runing through it to make it look even more deadly tha n it allready was.The black rusty metal gate towerd a good 20 ft above us and seemed very menacing.The sounds of screams could be heard from beyond the fearfull gate.It was then that i remembered Oliver.

Oliver.

I hadnt realised that he had followed us all the way down even though all three of us knew what would happen if he was to pass this terrible gate.

"Oliver no i wont let you.I lost you once and now we have finally found each other you cant go through their ITS SUICIDE!"

"But i have to.To protect my baby sister.No one not even you can change my mind."

I looked into the eyes of my pale determined brother and knew their was no point arguing hismind was made up and their was no way i could change it now.

"ok so whats the plan?"Asked Julie.

I looked at Oliver.He smiled a menacing smile.We *die*.He said. 

 

 

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On February 10th 2008 chelseaprice12 Said :
chelseaprice12 kewl!!!! KMP!!!!
On February 9th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 loool kill lilly lol the real mark is cumin round in a bit :D
On February 8th 2008 lilemoannie Said :
lilemoannie heyy x sweetie great story babe i loved it i think mark shud come back as the devils slave and be ordered to kill lilly cya soon babe annie
On February 8th 2008 xxdarkprincess Said :
xxdarkprincess i liked it
On February 7th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 comments please HAY lets play a game u can all comment and tell me what you would like to see in prt 9 and the best one will get turned into prt 9 of the power within us so comment me ur ideas as i love comments dont forget to tell me if u liked this or not LYYY!(Love you xx)