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Tragedy Created on 2-1-08 Views(48) Story Rating G

Laid still perfectly still on top of mt snoddy.We were all asleep consciosly.Our bodies eyes were on the lookout for danger.

I jolted out of the pleasurable daydreams from a sudden intake of breath from james.We all glanced over to him and what we saw made us grimace in shock.All around his body was a blue glow and his eyes were searching the intearior of his skull.His whole body was jolting as if it had been struck by lightning.

I heard a wimper from the right of me.It was julie crying at the sight of james in such a state.she loved him just as i loved mark and now she thought she was losing him.

Oliver explained to us that their was nothing we could do except wait.His powers were being stripped from him by the evil ghosts of all the worlds and if we interfeared we would die.

Their was pain in my heart and fear as i saw one of my best friends in such a state and then snoddy cracked such a huge crack that we all nearly fell in to it.

Then it happend.James`s body rolled of and into the crack and so did the very much alive body of....

 

 

aha you have got to leave me a comment on who should also roll into hells pit! 1 for lilly 2 for mark and 3 for julie oh and should james die never to be seen again only to become the  devils slave  YOU DECIDE! COMMENT QUIK 2 DAYS TO COMMENT 

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On February 10th 2008 chelseaprice12 Said :
chelseaprice12 LILLY. really good story!!!!
On February 7th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 kk prt eight owt tonight
On February 3rd 2008 xxdarkprincess Said :
xxdarkprincess i like mark i just think some good thing could happen if he lost his piowers but donmt kill him
On February 2nd 2008 luvsanhugs01 Said :
luvsanhugs01 Get lilly to fall in and keep them alive!!!!
On February 2nd 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 wow u lot really dont like mark do you lol well keep commenting onli 1 day left for prt 8!
On February 1st 2008 xxdarkprincess Said :
xxdarkprincess i think mark should lose his powers too and dont kill james keep writin there good
On February 1st 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic ...Wow...Hmm.I don't know...
On February 1st 2008 lilemoannie Said :
lilemoannie mark shud come back as the devils slave after fallin in after james james shud burn in hell lool keep writin huns these r ace luv yas chickadee annie