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Tragedy Created on 1-30-08 Views(66) Story Rating G

When did i call you?

Oliver wiped a hand in the air infront of me and the flash back developed me,i was the flashback and the flashback was me.

I saw myself in a huge pool of whiteness with nothing around me i was searchin and saying "oliver, oliver where are you i need you." Then a blue flash and i was back.Realisation of what i had just seen hit me.It was when i had died (for the secound time.)I had forgotten just how scared i was and exactly how long i had been their.I had forgotten everything i had done in that void of whiteness and now it came back to me.I had been searching for my dead brother and now he was here standing as if the life had never left his body and the sun had never ceased shining on his pale complextiones.

I ran to him and embraced him.I had really missed my brother and it only now dawned on me how much i had needed him in this new life.

A gasp from the right of me brought me back down to earth.I looked down at the now flickering life fource of my love mark and i felt tears well up inside me.James put his hand comfortingly on my shoulder and julie held my hand as if to say "dont be scared its ok we are here for you."

I caustiosly stepped towards the body of mark as his chest heaved, gulping for air.I bent down beside him and grasped his hand.

"mark take it slowly its ok im here now its me lilly calm down, i love you."

"Lilly...." he stumbled over the letters but i heard him fine i smiled and fresh tears came streaming down my face.Mark was back and this time he wasn`t leaving me i wouldn`t let him go.

I softly  kissed his damp lips and wiped the sweat from his brow.He tryed sitting up but i wouldnt let him.He was still too weak.I gently put his head on my lap and helped him sit up.

"Im sorry for scaring you Lilly Ill never leave you again."he wispered he pushed himself up to my level and gave me my first proper full on kiss.It took my breath away.

Later myself,mark,oliver,james and julie all laid down at the top of mt snoddy staring at the sky thanking life for all the pleasures it throws at us.But it wouldnt last we knew that all too well...

 

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On February 10th 2008 chelseaprice12 Said :
chelseaprice12 wow i really love this story!!!!!
On February 1st 2008 xxdarkprincess Said :
xxdarkprincess 2 mark and write more its good
On February 1st 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 ok most people have voted james so james it is prt 7 cumin up
On February 1st 2008 lilemoannie Said :
lilemoannie james
On January 31st 2008 Iamoffensive Said :
Iamoffensive 4 James. I think it would be the most bittersweet to see him lose his.
On January 31st 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Hmm...I'll go with 2 (Mark), but that's just a random choice...I'm loving this story!
On January 31st 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 ok please comment and rate if you lke the story it would mean alot to me um five rates for prt 7 and you need to decide which guradian should lose their powers put 1 for lilly 2 for mark 3 for julie and 4 for james i will check within houres