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Creative Created on 1-20-08 Views(76) Story Rating G

As i came back up the hill,tears streaming down my face i saw blue swirls enveloping James and Julie.The gelf had returned.The blue ghosts travel by burning up the air around which a human is breathing and thats exactly what theiy were doing now.But as soon as i stepped towards them theiy vanished leaving my two friends to fall to the floor from lack of oygen.

I waited with them untill theiy came round.As soon as theiy awoke we went to get marks body but someone was allready their.A tall figure with floppy blonde hair and blue eyes like sapphires.His skin was the same eerily white colour of Rebbecas.My heart missed a beat when i saw him.He was the same age as me by the look of him but theor was something familier about him i just couldn`t quite remember...

I hadn`t noticed before but i was seriosly out of breath.I Gasped the cold fresh air.Hearing me breathing the mysterios boy turned to look at me.He smiled when he saw me.Then i remembered. He was their when i died the first time...

"Hello Lilly."He said.His voice was like an angels.

"Hay oliver"I sighed.How much i had missed my older brother from my fist life you can`t imagine.He was the reason Rebbeca was dead.He was also the reason that he himself was dead. 

"what are you doing back and more to the point what are you doing to him?" I said pointing to mark who wss lying lifelessly frozen on the floor.

"you called me.Don`t you remember?Oh and im waiting for him to come back....." 

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On February 10th 2008 chelseaprice12 Said :
chelseaprice12 yay he get sto come back!!! :D
On January 30th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 ok i wont stop prt 6 out tonight
On January 29th 2008 xxdarkprincess Said :
xxdarkprincess io really like it please dont stop it's too good
On January 29th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
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On January 24th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
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On January 21st 2008 xxdarkprincess Said :
xxdarkprincess i love your storys there soo good
On January 21st 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 ch 6 7 and 8 will be released tonight if i get 5 rates come on if i dont get 5 rates i will not write this anymore
On January 20th 2008 purelyevil7 Said :
purelyevil7 gr8 story i voted
On January 20th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 tell me what you think please and ch 6 will be out tomorrow if i gt 5 rates.pleasseee rate n comment