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Tragedy Created on 1-20-08 Views(69) Story Rating G

We stepped onto the slippery wooden bridge. For a while we just stood and listend to the sound of the rushing water.I looked at the rock which had taken my life before , it sent  cold chills up my spine.I turned away only to see a girl the same age as me with brown curls hanging around her shoulders and eerily white skin. She smiled a smile that was so evil it was only ever seen on a murderors face.

"Why can`t you leave me alone?!" i cried causing Julie to spin around and also see Rebbeca standing their.

"Because i want to kill you is that so hard to belive?" her voice echoed around me like a fly that won`t leave you alone. She took a step forward and continued speaking in her mischeavous voice.

"Oh and it looks like im about to do it again!" Before i could even say "empower the gurdian!" she had pushed me into the river.With a loud CRACK! As my head bounced of the huge rock my life was gone.The last thing i remember seeing was Julie running straight through my ghost sister and screaming for help.

 

Whiteness surrounded me as i was enveloped in time .Then a voice spoke.

"Lilly earth guradian, savior of the world you are hereby sent back to earth untill good triumphs over that which is evil. But you will only awake by your true loves tears."

I awoke well sort of unconsciosly but i knew i was back.I felt the tears hit my face and the arms of my love mark holding onto me.My eyes flickered open i was lying on the bridge with mark holding me,James looking worried at the right of me with his arm around Julie.

"im back."I wispered. 

 

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On February 10th 2008 chelseaprice12 Said :
chelseaprice12 wow this is really getting interesting!!!!!
On February 2nd 2008 Ostupid1 Said :
Ostupid1 still reading.... I must catch up with everyone else. off to the next chapter!!!
On January 20th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 pllleeeeeaaaasseee vote
On January 20th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 prt 5 wil be out soon
On January 20th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 thnks hun plz vote other pple coz i really need to no wot u think b4 i write the rest of em by the way part 4 of the power within us is out]
On January 20th 2008 purelyevil7 Said :
purelyevil7 gr8 story
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lolli2duble0h8 plz comment