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It's been five months since my first day of school. Now call me what you want I has happy that Deidra was sick from an allergic reeatcion to oranges! So Jake and I finally agreed to meet by the bathrooms in 11th period studyhall!
I went to bathrooms during 11th period, it was so exciting because never in Russia did we have studyhall, or restrooms for students! I waited and waited. No Jake yet... I wonder where is he?Then in the shadows near the bathroom a guy popped out!
"Sorry if I startled you Kia, my fault. Hey, Jake told me to tell you that he completely forgot that he had to tutor some kid today, and he say that he's so sorry," Deidra's current boyfriend Dean explains, "Also tell Deidra that I'll be at your house at 5:00 tomorrow"
"Wait what? Your coming over?" I retorted
"Yeah, alright see 'ya." He exclaimed
Now don't get me wrong I want Dean to come over on Friday, I mean he has beautiful dark brown hair with blonde tips. And don't get me started on his rock hard abs!
It was Friday morning, and tonight Dean was coming over. And today was the last day Deidra would miss school, so I had to tell Jake how I felt about him!
As I walked into the school I noticed that most of the guys were staring at me! At first I thought that maybe my skirt was showing to much, or maybe I had something in my teeth. Finally I went over to one of them and asked what he was staring at!
"Um... Sorry I'm Corey, well, it's just that wow! Your HOT!"
Later that evening I noticed that My aunts, uncles, parents, siblings, cousins, and granparents were about to leave. I asked Deidra what about Dean and she said to let him in and tell him to wait and that she would be home about nine o'clock. And I also noticed that it was about quarter til five. I didn't want to go so my mother let me stay home.
I hurried up and cleaned up a little, just when I heard the doorbell ring. I rushed over and explained to Dean to wait in the living room until. And of course I followed him in there with him. After about ten minutes I said that I'm bored.
"Hey do you wanna play a game?" He asked
"Ahh, sure. What game?" I quickly replied
"It's called the 'Nervous Game' so do you wanna play?"Dean said
Now of course I still wasn't fimilar to American "Sexy Games" so I said sure... Then he said lay down on the couch and tie this blindfold around your eyes. I said ok. Then he said to take off my shirt. I still didn't quite understand what he was doing so I took off my shirt leaving nothing but my semi-see-through bra and my short mini skirt on.
"Ok. Good, now tell me when it hurts! Now remember when you say that it hurts you lose. And when you lose you have to let me do what ever I want to do to you for two minutes." He explains
"Alright," I say still not quite sure about what he was going to do to me.
Then suddenly, he rips off my skirt and pulls off my bra and underwear off, revealing myself to him.
"Hey! What are you doing?" I scream
"Hang on, I was just making a few adjustments." He says as he rips off all of his clothes. "Ok, better. Now tell me when it hurts!"
He took his two fingers and twisted them up inside me, then licks me all over and says now it's my turn. I told him that I didn't like this game anymore, when he takes me from behind and tackles me down, and then starts forneicating with me!
I managed to throw him off of me long enough for me to get my clothes back on and run outside. He rises infront of me and tackles me into an icy pile of snow! He takes his fingers and puts the back into me. I thought for sure that he was going to kill me, that's how bad it hurt! I then begin to think that it was all over with for me, when suddenly out of the shadows I hear a fimilar vioce. I was still to dazed to understand whose though.
The next morning , or so I thought, I awoke in a hospital bed, Jake crying and sitting by my side. I still didn't quite understand what was going on. I woke up enough so that Jake could explain what was happening to me. Jake then said
"I was walking home from tutoring when I saw you running from Dean, I tackled him. I called for help and stayed by your side ever since. It happened three months ago! You were in a coma, he hurt you so bad!"
I tried to tell him that I love him when Dean broke into the room and stabbed Jake and then locked the door!
"I love you Kia! We need each other! I even spent two months in prison for you! We need to be together! Now tell me that you love me or I will kill him now!"
"No... Ah... No" I muttered
"Fine then he dies now!" Dean Shouts!
"I... I... Love.... I love... ahh... you" I mumbled
"Good," He said while pushing me closer to the window. "Now if you love me you will jump out of the window with me. Now jump! Jump I say, Jump,"
I was about to jump when a couple of doctors, and my parents Banged on the door, threatning to call the police!
"Now don't mind them and hurry up and jump!" He yelled
Thoughts were racing through my head! Should I stay and die with Jake? Should I attempt to grab his knife? Should I open the door? Or should I jump and possibly die but Jake might live then?
Comments
| On March 18th 2008 muffinbobeat48 Said : | |
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bam bam bam bam! Things happen at breakneck speed. I understand your desire to want to keep things moving, and that's great. However, life doesn't work like that, and there's not enough exposition for something to go that quickly. Props for action, though! |
| On March 18th 2008 counterpart Said : | |
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good. but how come she was in a coma just from that? |
| On March 16th 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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nice work! |
| On March 15th 2008 Lemonkiss7 Said : | |
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funners I likes it |
| On March 14th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said : | |
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Oooh |
| On March 6th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Oh wow!! |
| On March 4th 2008 fawzia11 Said : | |
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kmp |
| On March 2nd 2008 chelseaprice12 Said : | |
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ooh! kmp! |
| On February 16th 2008 JeReMeYxxxJaZz Said : | |
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it does to seem real! |
| On February 13th 2008 FamousOne777 Said : | |
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still reading... |
| On February 12th 2008 analyssarenae Said : | |
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i like it. but it doesnt seem very real. |
| On February 10th 2008 ALICHELLA16 Said : | |
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This story lacks feeling and realistic ness. |


