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Catch of the Year.. The Final Fling |
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CATCH OF THE YEAR PT.2 |
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My Final Goodbye |
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It started out with a little kiss and a hug...
- Cameron was so excited. He was finally getting to go on a date with Melissa.
He has crushed on this girl for most of his life and he would give anything for just one kiss. She talked to him everyday at school and at the tender age of 16 she was finally able to date. Cameron was so excited because finally he would ask her out in hopes she wouldn't reject him. They were best friends and had been for most of their lives.
Melissa was a well known beauty in the town. All the guys liked her and all the girls hated her. She had the clearest blue eyes you had ever seen, but that was just to match her perfect smile. The longest and fullest blonde hair and the perfect tan to boot. She was every boys dream.
All she wanted to do was go to school and come home.. She was the middle child and of course by far the prettiest. Her sisters were jealous of her. Though they were not ugly either, they just didn't have the personality to keep the guys lined up.
Cameron was a 6'1 linebacker for the local high school team. He had the most gorgeous blue eyes and the leanest body you ever seen on a 17 year old. He was wildfire waiting to explode and spread his passions all over. He drove a candy apple red mustang convertible and worked for every penny he owned...His mother was the local town whore and who knows where his father ended up at. Luckily, Cameron was an only child.
The day began with class together as they sit and listened to the teacher. Cameron didn't have the nerve to ask her out just yet. Melissa knew he was up to something but couldn't figure it out. As the day went on finally he thought the time was right. He asked her out on a date that night. She said yes of course and he would pick her up at 8.
He arrived at her house ten minutes early just to meet her parents and to talk to them a little. She had to be home by 12 they told him. He thought he would start with a movie then off to the most expensive resturaunt in town. All was going great but by 9 they were out of the resturaunt and wanting to go be alone.
They went to the local "parking" area where all the teens went on their dates. Melissa was nervous as she leaned in to meet his lips with a passionate kiss. His tongue swept in her mouth like the wind taking a flowers petals away and she loved it. She met his every move with her tongue. He had roman hands and russian fingers and she couldn't wait.
"Stop" she said. i can't do this. i am only 16 and there are so many things that could go wrong. Cameron agreed to stop as they lay on his hood looking at the stars. They soon got back in the car, but didn't realize they were all alone on the lookout. He again started caressing her breasts and kissing her.. She was saying stop she didnt want to but he didn't listen. He tore open her blouse and kissed down her chest all the while he had his hand over her mouth. Passion and lust had consumed him and she was scared. He then ripped her panties off and pulled down his pants. He was sweating and she was crying. As he forced himself inside her she was so scared and it hurt so bad. He was having his way with her when she passed out from the shock of what was happening.
After he was through he layed there staring at her in disbelief. He couldn't believe he had just hurt her the way he did. Afterall, he really did love her but who was she to turn him down. He soon took her home and made her swear not to tell.
She wasn't going to tell anyone until she found out that she was pregnant. All she could say to him was how do i explain to this child and to my parents what happened and why i am pregnant? He didn't care. She had ignored him for the past 2 weeks and he was tired of being her friend anyways. The day came for her to finally confess what happened. Her mother held her and cried with her and her father swore vengence for what had happened. She said she would keep the baby long enough to find a home for it with a loving couple who couldn't have kids and Cameron was furious. "How could you" he screamed at her. That child is a reminder of a night gone bad and i won't have it he said. She told him it didnt matter what he thought..He wasn't thinking when he forced himself on her and now she was paying the price. They ended their friendship and never spoke again. Melissa kept the baby and is now raising a beautiful 5 year old little girl...
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| On May 5th 2007 Godroxmysocks Said : | |
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That was really awesome! It reminds me of my sister... |
| On April 12th 2007 vampirinsic Said : | |
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jesus, ur story really touched me. i mean u hear about this kinda thing on lifetime all the time, but its never affected me like this until i read ur story. ur like, a messenger from god to change our perspectives. KICK ASS! |
| On March 10th 2007 tigerbaby7644 Said : | |
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wow i thought this was going to be one of those "i found my true love story" but then it changed...ur a reall good writer..i love reading ur storys |
| On February 19th 2007 ThisIsTheDay Said : | |
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wow......awesome
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| On January 30th 2007 Wes555 Said : | |
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I loved the story and i have to agree with the others it is a little rushed at the end! |
| On January 30th 2007 Wes555 Said : | |
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OMG! That story was so good i really hope that never happens to my girl.. especially Not by me! |
| On January 30th 2007 MissMurder26 Said : | |
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Its very very good. Extreamly powerful... You rushed the ending a bit though. Loved it other than that. |
| On January 30th 2007 misha9944 Said : | |
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you really do have a talent. |
| On January 30th 2007 monica11221987 Said : | |
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I have really enjoyed reading this. I think you are very talemted and you make me smile with the way you write. You are descriptive and detailed. Very nice....keep up the good work! |
| On January 30th 2007 ERICLOVER17 Said : | |
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wow that was the best story i ever read today |
| On January 30th 2007 tears4him88 Said : | |
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That was awesome!! You have a great talent. I can honestly say from experience that I felt as if I was reading about my own life... |
| On January 30th 2007 lilgirl1690 Said : | |
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thanks for the comments i appreciate it.. |
| On January 30th 2007 OutOfReach Said : | |
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I like it, it's pretty good. Aye, the ending was a bit rushed, but other than that it was good. Congrats. =D |
| On January 30th 2007 LokiSeto Said : | |
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Very powerful... although a little rushed at the end. I mean I had to do a double take when you said they were on the hood. Also I loved the line "He was wildfire waiting to explode and spread his passions all over." Perfect. Absolutely perfect. |
| On January 30th 2007 rellcinko Said : | |
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wow...thats like all i can say |


