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"What's wrong with you?" Val say's as she jumps out of the bed. John just looks at her.

                           "Nothings wrong with me, I just stayed the night."

                           "Yeah, after you scared the hell out of me. How can you pretend nothing happened?"

                            "Because, nothing happened, all I did was give you proof." John got out of the bed and pulled his shirt on.

                             John walked over to Valerie, "come on, I would never hurt you." He went to give her a hug, but she pulled away.

                              "Get out of my house," she mumbled. "Please just go."

                               "But.."

                                "John, leave" Valerie glared at him. John starred at her. "I'll walk you out." Valerie went with John down the stairs, when suddenly the lights went out.

                                 John became tense, Valerie saw it in his eye's. "Valerie, go back up stairs."

                                 "What? Why..."

                                 "GO!" John yelled. As John pushed Valerie up the stairs, she saw someting jump out of the darkness. She ran up to her room, and closed the door. She heard a scream, and then silence. She began to back away from the door, when she bumped into someting.

                                   "Oh, thank you John..." Valerie lost her voice. The person behind her wasn't John, It was someone else with fangs and sharp blue eye's. "JOHN!!!!!!" Valerie screamed. The door flew open, and the monster in front of her was against the wall. John was punching him in the face, then he took Valeries lamp, and shoved it through the vampires heart. The Vampire whispered something to John, coughed, and died. Valerie fainted.

                                    

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