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Fate (Part Five)

Creative Created on 4-2-08 Views(60) Story Rating G

 Kaeli woke up rather early,because everyone else was still sleeping.She couldn't tell what time it was though,because all the trees blocked the sky from view.She stood up and stretched a bit,but quickly stopped because it seemed as though her stomach was going to bite her.She sat down and held her stomach in pain.She just sat there,thinking about the situation.She was so deep in thought,she didn't notice Amelia wake up.

 "Hey dude,"Amelia said with a yawn,"I'm so freaking hungry right now,I would eat almost anything."She got up and sat next to Kaeli,staring out into the dense jungle.

 "Uugh,I know,what are we gonna do?,"Kaeli groaned.

 Amelia looked back at the boys,then said,"I don't know..."

 They continued staring out,not sure of what they were going to do.Noah's snoring was apparently loud,because it was enough to wake Chris up.Chris rubbed his eyes,then looked around and groaned,as though he was hoping that it had just been a bad dream.He sat up,and sat next to the girls.

 "Hi,Chris,"Amelia said,she didn't look at him though.She was still staring out.

 "Hey,any idea what we're going to do?,"Chris asked them both.

 "Nope,"They both said in sync.

 They finally came to the decision to wake Noah up.They all just kept shoving him.Finally he woke up.

 "What the?,"He said,annoyed.

 "Come on,lets go back to the beach,maybe we'll see someone else,"Chris said.They all agreed.

 They began walking through the darkened jungle.Its floor was thick with mist.They often tripped over things,but they were fine.They walked on and on through the place.It seemed endless.Amelia was close to falling over in exhaustion.They were about to sit down and take a break,but then they heard something.

 "Was I the only one who heard that?,"Kaeli said,worried.

 "No,unless we're both going crazy,"Amelia said with a frightened expression.

 They heard the sound again,only this time closer.It was slowly treading towards them.It was clear to them something was there,but what it was; they didn't have a clue.It kept creeping towards them.They all looked at each other,but they didn't speak.They didn't have to,the look in all their eyes clearly screamed that they should leave.They all began running as fast as they could.They still felt like someone was following them.All of them ran,but still there were an extra pair of feet,possibly more,keeping close.Chris was running ahead of them,when all of a sudden he came to a sudden halt.He looked at the person,or thing is more like it,in front of him.He had no idea what it was.All he could do is stare up at it.It was like some kind of demon like thing.It towered over Chris's 5' 11",it seemed like it was undead.It grinned a sinister smile down at them all.Amelia tried to run,but two more things similar to the first was right behind her.She looked at them in horror and shrieked,

 "What the hell are you things!?!" 

 They didn't answer her.Instead one threw her down like she was a stick.She helplessly laid on the ground,looking up at them.Kaeli tried punching the one the one that had thrown Amelia.She didn't even touch him.Instead,he got her by the gut,and slammed her against a tree.It almost knocked her out cold.

 "Kaeli!!"Chris screamed,infuriated.He got one in the jaw,but another one got him in the face,and knocked him into a cage they had apparently brought along.Noah quickly helped him out and the boys tried fighting off the demons.Amelia was trying to help Kaeli come back to her senses.But one of the demons noticed her,and grabbed them both by the neck,and threw them into a seperate cage they'd brought.Amelia was still awake,but Kaeli was knocked unconscious.Amelia tried to get the two of them out but one of the demons slammed the door.Kaeli was about to wake up,but one of the demons had slammed Noah against it and knocked her out completely...

 

O.O!!Haha u havez to wait!!

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On April 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Ah! Scary! Kmupdated~ so sorry I took so long too!
On April 4th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 Love it kmp :)
On April 4th 2008 C4444 Said :
C4444 ooooooooo! creepy demons got to love them very interesting.... kmp:)
On April 3rd 2008 me1is1brittany Said :
me1is1brittany Wow.Kmp.
On April 3rd 2008 tigerbaby7644 Said :
tigerbaby7644 hmmmmmmm intersting..kmp
On April 3rd 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s kmp!!!
On April 3rd 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 kmp this is a great story