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Fate (Part Three)

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And things went like a dream on the cruise.There was always something new for them to do each day,and Kaeli and Chris grew closer with every passing second.It was like some kind of heaven.

 Kaeli woke up early one day (about after being on the cruise for about a month.)She sat in her favorite spot near the front of the boat,and watched the sunrise.She got lost in her imagination,and didn't notice Chris come out and sit next to her.

"Busy doing absolutely nothing,I see?"Chris teased her.

 Kaeli hugged him,and said "Nope,just thinking.."

"About what?"

She sighed a bit,"About they day where we have to get off this paradise."

Chris looked at her for a bit,then stared off."Yeah,that probably gonna suck.But hey,we don't have to get off yet."

"Yeah,I guess you're right.But I don't wanna get off EVER."Kaeli sighed again.

"Well stop thinking about the future and focus on NOW."He nudged her shoulder.

"Yeah,you're right."She said and leaned on his shoulder.

"Of course I am."And they both laughed.

 Later,when Amelia and Noah were both up,they decided to go play with some paint-ball guns (some of the many things they bought at the stores).Girls VS Boys.As usual,Kaeli had to save Amelia's butt from getting kicked.

"Amelia come on,I know you can do better than that...whatever THAT  was." Kaeli joked.

"Well you're better than me at paint balling,I'm better than you at texting."They both laughed,but then screamed when the boys covered them in paint.

 When they were through,they all got washed off.Of course it took the girls forever because they would die if their hair was frizzy.Finally,they met the boys at the front of the ship.

 "Sheesh,what were you two doing?"Noah whined.

 "Making ourselves look absolutely perfect."The girls both said in sync.

Chris laughed,"Well Amelia you could use a little more work."

Noah laughed at her while she just stuck her tongue out.

Noah laughed a little more  then said,"Come on,I think its time for dinner."

 They all began walking towards the dining hall when all of a sudden,they were jerked to the side of the ship.

"What the?!"Amelia screamed.

 Jessy ran over,"Are you guys okay?"

 The ship was still being jerked,Kaeli screamed,"Yeah,but what the hell is going on?!"

 Jessy yelled back,"I think we're stuck in a whirlpool!"

And she was right.The ship had gotten caught in a whirlpool and was twisting out of control.

 Kaeli and Amelia grabbed each other while the boys held on to the railing.Kaeli held Amelia close and closed her eyes tight.

 "This isn't happening...this isn't happening..."She thought quietly.

 She never opened her eyes for a second,though she could hear everyone screaming,and she just tried to shut everything out for a moment.It was working until suddenly,the ship jerked hard to the right and everything on the ship flew to that side,right towards them.A large pool table crashed through the railing,while some beach chairs headed right towards them.The boys tried to grab the girls but they wouldn't let go of each other.But then they hit the water,Amelia was practically knocked out and Kaeli had to drag her to the surface.

 "Kaeli!Noah!"They could hear Jessy screaming.

They had to start swimming away from the boat,or the whirlpool would suck them right in.They were swimming for their lives,but then stopped,turned around,and looked at the horror headed their way.The ship had jerked towards the right again and everything rushed to the right and caused the ship to capsize.

 "Kaeli!!!"Chris began yelling and swam towards her.But he was too slow.The ship had hit the water,causing a massive tidal wave right in their direction.The moment the wave hit them,they all blacked out...

 

DUN DUN DUN...=O.(don't worry...they aren't dead.)And,I've figured out how this is ending =)

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On April 4th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 This is getting good :)
On April 1st 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Oh~ I wasn't expecting that. I'm off to read the next part now :)
On March 31st 2008 tigerbaby7644 Said :
tigerbaby7644 omg hope there ok...DEFF KEEP ME POSTED THIS IS WAY GOOD
On March 31st 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s love it!! kmp
On March 30th 2008 Realmuckoy Said :
Realmuckoy Darn you and your leaving me hanging!!!! PLeez write more!!! this is great! I love it XDXD
On March 30th 2008 spongbobsgirl Said :
spongbobsgirl KMP!!!!!!!!
On March 30th 2008 me1is1brittany Said :
me1is1brittany OMG! Kmp please.
On March 30th 2008 C4444 Said :
C4444 Cliffhanger!!!! omg keep me posted!!!!!
On March 30th 2008 dangg101 Said :
dangg101 I was gettin ready to type "NOOOOOO DON'T LET ANY ONE DIE!"kmp please love it!