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Fate (Part One)

Creative Created on 3-28-08 Views(137) Story Rating G

 The sky was a clear blue.The dock was full of different types of sounds,whether it was the crying of gulls or the chatter of people.The kids looked up at the giant ocean liner.

"This trip is going to be SO fun!" Amelia said and smiled at Kaeli.

"I know,aren't you glad you have a friend like me?" Kaeli teased.

"Oh shut up,you know I am."Amelia laughed.

Kaeli had won a trip to the Bermuda Triangle,and was able to take along four friends.She took her best friend,Amelia,her older sister Jesse,her brother Noah and his friend Chris.

"Come on you guys,we don't want to be last to get on."Jesse said.

"Well what the heck are we waiting for?"Noah and Chris said in sync.

They all ran up onto the ship,and stared around eagerly.A ship attendant came and showed them to their rooms.Kaeli,Amelia,and Jesse were all sharing a room while Chris and Noah got the one across from them.The rooms were amazing,sky lights,flat screen in each room.It was paradise.After they got unpacked and settled in,Kaeli and Amelia ran over to the boys' door and practically knocked it over.

"Come on!Are we gonna explore or what?"Kaeli asked.

"Well lets go then!"Chris answered.

The kids ran around the ship like maniacs.There were so many things to see,it was like a floating city.They found 4 pools on it,but they wanted to see a bit more of the ship before they did anything.They ran around and found boutiques,restaurants,and so much more.But the thing that really caught their eye was the arcade.

"AWESOME!!!!!"The boys yelled.

There was like every game in the world there,and not just the regular ones like Pac Man either.There were Wii games,Xbox games,Guitar Hero and a lot more.Kaeli immediatley ran towards Guitar Hero and was surprised to see Chris try and keep up.

"So...come to get your butt kicked I see?"Kaeli taunted Chris.

"Ha,you wish!"Chris grinned back.

They played forever it seemed,Amelia tried pulling Kaeli away from it to play some other game but it was no use.Chris was shocked to see that he was losing.

Kaeli giggled,"So,like I was saying,you came to get your butt kicked?"

Chris just smiled back.

Later,a voice echoed through an intercom (or however you spell it).It was time to go dinner.

"Race ya!Unless you know you're gonna lose!"Noah yelled as he began running.

They all raced towards the dining room then came to a sudden halt as they stared at the humongous room.It was like some sort of castle where you would see people walking around dressed like they were meeting the queen.

"Whoa..."Amelia said,stunned.

"This place just keeps on getting better and better!!!!"Kaeli screamed with joy.

They were all seated by a waiter at a long table.Then they were all handed menus that seemed to go on for an eternity.They ordered everything their heart.It was as though they were royalty.Finally,after about 30 minutes,the food came.

"Oh..my..god!"Noah said as he looked at all the food."I'm not sure if I can even eat half of this!"

And he was right,same with the others.They were completely stuffed.So Chris and Noah decided to have some fun...

"FOOD FIGHT!!!!!!"They both hollered at the top of their lungs and began throwing food at Amelia.

"EEEEEW!!!CHRIS!!NOAH!!STOP IT!!!"She demanded.

"Don't try and leave me out!"Kaeli said and began pelting the two with shrimp.

"Return fire!"The two boys screamed.

And they continued to throw food at  each other,not to mention hitting other people as well.Finally,some waiters came and kicked them out of the dining room.

After washing up,they all went to their rooms. and laid down.

"Today was like,the best day ever."Kaeli sighed,out of breath.

"I know,and to think every day is going to be like this!"Amelia exclaimed.

After a while,Amelia dozed off and was in a deep sleep,along with Jesse.But Kaeli's mind was full of ideas and she couldn't sleep.So she decided to go out and sit on the deck.It was a quiet,peaceful night on the sea.The wind softly blew through Kaeli's hair as she sat there,staring at the stars.She thought she heard something,so she looked behind her;It was Chris.Kaeli jumped,startled.

"Chris!You almost gave me heart attack!"She said angrily.

"Oh shut up,you know I was just playing around."He laughed. 

"So what are you doing up this late?Kaeli asked.

"Bored,Noah fell asleep the moment he touched the bed,so I decided to come out here."He said.

"Eh,I just came out here because I couldn't sleep.Too excited I guess."She smiled.

"Well you're probably excited to kick my butt in Guitar Hero again."He laughed.

"Its not my fault I rock at that game."She replied.

"Well I'm tired now,I dunno why but I am.See ya tomorrow."He said with a yawn.

She gave him a hug,"Night night."

He blushed a bit,then headed off to his room. 

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On April 16th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 aww i like it so far
On April 4th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 I love it
On March 29th 2008 C4444 Said :
C4444 so far really good!!!
On March 28th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s i really like it! kmp
On March 28th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s i really like it! kmp
On March 28th 2008 tigerbaby7644 Said :
tigerbaby7644 i like this story...kmp please
On March 28th 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 i like it alot (your really good at writing) kmp
On March 28th 2008 dangg101 Said :
dangg101 Awww i like the sound of Kaeli & Chris! kmp please! i love it already! lol
On March 28th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Aww~ Kaeli and Chis :) kmupdated. It's good so far.
On March 28th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said :
XxbloodstainxX This is very intersting. KMP
On March 28th 2008 me1is1brittany Said :
me1is1brittany I like it already.Kmp.