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Introduction : Fate

Creative Created on 3-26-08 Views(98) Story Rating G

Hey,this is a story I was thinking about writing...but like I've said before I'm not sure story writing is for me...So please,give me your opinion on this and I will possibly write more...please be honest...

 

(Basic story outline without giving too much away...)

14 year old Kaeli,wins a cruise to visit the Bermuda triangle...she invites her best friend Amelia,her older sister Jesse,her brother Noah and his friend Chris.In the beginning of her trip...things seem as though they are going to be wonderful....but things go like she would never dream in her twisted fate...

Its going to be kind of fantasy sort of thing...please tell me if you would like me to write on this...Thanks..

 

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On March 28th 2008 C4444 Said :
C4444 Please write more u should always write with your heart. Everybody will love your story no matter what sounds like it will be real good!!!!! plz kmp :)
On March 27th 2008 spongbobsgirl Said :
spongbobsgirl i think its awesome already! kmp
On March 27th 2008 icsgrad07 Said :
icsgrad07 o heck yea, this sounds awesome
On March 27th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said :
XxbloodstainxX I agree with brokenwings122. I think you do have a chance though at making the story succed, you have strong poems so your story should be good as well.
On March 27th 2008 brokenwings122 Said :
brokenwings122 I think that this has real potential, but any story does. It all depends on the way you write, your personal voice, and the way you develope the story. Kmp.
On March 27th 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 it's great if you write more kmp
On March 27th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Oh please write more! I don't think anyone should get discouraged about trying new things. If people judge it, tell them to crowd surf off a cliff :) or not. lol you get what I mean. I wasn't sure about writing either. It took me a while to get the hang of it. Kmp if you do get the time to write a story :)
On March 27th 2008 Realmuckoy Said :
Realmuckoy Absolutely... Keep it up.!!!!!! and KMP!!!!! XD
On March 27th 2008 Realmuckoy Said :
Realmuckoy Absolutely... Keep it up.!!!!!! and KMP!!!!! XD
On March 27th 2008 Jermie6363 Said :
Jermie6363 Kmp
On March 27th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s cool. if u do write more kmp!
On March 27th 2008 kesaia1029 Said :
kesaia1029 sorry,i tried making the intro a bit better but its hard when you're trying to give a bit much away....its also a bit violent,not sure how much but ya,and possibly i may throw in some romance..