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The Day He Left

Tragedy Created on 3-24-08 Views(125) Story Rating G

I really don't mind if anyone doesn't like this...I merely wrote it because I've been writing a lot about him and I don't know why.So I figured its because I haven't talked about it much.I can remember this day perfectly ;its forever burned in my mind...(I was only 6)

I could hear muffled screams,though I was trying not too.Mommy and Daddy were fighting again.All I could do is sit in the closet...cover my ears and cry.I heard things crashing and Mommy screaming things at Daddy as he packed his things.

I could tell he was almost ready to leave,because Mommy started begging him,"Please,don't go.I didn't mean those things I said..please."Daddy got mad and began yelling at her."Why!?Why do you want me to stay!?"

It was silent,but I didn't dare look to check.I heard the two coming up the stairs..closer towards me.Mommy ran into my room,slid open the closet,and there I was.Back facing the door,crying."This,is why I want you to stay."Mommy said.I couldn't see them,but I could tell Daddy was staring at me.He didn't say a word,he just left and continued packing.

Mommy began to yell at him again,calling him names and telling him to leave and see if she cared.I heard Daddy walking towards the door.I ran downstairs and flung myself around his legs and wouldn't let go."Daddy,why are you leaving me?I thought you loved me,Daddy?"He continued to ignore my pleas,but I didn't let go."Daddy please!Mommy is lying,she doesn't want you to go!Daddy..."I continued to scream my questions at him.Finally...he screamed at me "Let go you little shit!"And I did.I just fell to the floor,not used to the feeling of being broken,and watched him walk out.

I have never seen my dad after this...I never quite understood why they fought for I was too young.Thanks for reading this....

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On March 26th 2008 Jermie6363 Said :
Jermie6363 this is sad.... 2 thumbs up
On March 25th 2008 chelseaprice12 Said :
chelseaprice12 ohh, im sorry! i hate your father now >:(
On March 25th 2008 angeleyes62580 Said :
angeleyes62580 I am sorry for you pain, he doesnt know what a talent and wonderful daughter he has!!
On March 25th 2008 icsgrad07 Said :
icsgrad07 that is so sad, very well written
On March 25th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 man what a terrible day that must have been atleast your coming out and talking about it does help alot to mend the heartache. i think you wrote it well too.
On March 25th 2008 emoathiest Said :
emoathiest im sry my dad died so i know wat its like to lose somone
On March 24th 2008 spongbobsgirl Said :
spongbobsgirl he called you a shit? i ofically hate ur dad. >:P
On March 24th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s i remember the day mine left too. he told me a few years ago that he wont come baq because he is ashamed. so idk...i kno why my dad left but it still hurts. but God Bless u sweetie. =]
On March 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Oh~ I'm sorry sweetie. ~hugs~ I think he probably has alot of guilt. That being the last thing he said to you, would maybe make him feel too ashamed of himself to come back. I don't know though. I'm happy you could write it all out though. :)
On March 24th 2008 chayeah22 Said :
chayeah22 You know peoples who's parents leave always say to those who still have their's "You are so lucky" But if you think about it, if they had stayed around....what would have happened? If it was that bad....don't wish him back. (i'm not saying u are but if u ever wonder...that's what I beleive.)
On March 24th 2008 Realmuckoy Said :
Realmuckoy I can say that I honestly feel your pain. I didn't even get to know my father. He left before I was born... because of me. But I think that it must be much harder for you because you actually knew him for a time... and he just left. I'm sorry, and I can honestly feel your pain
On March 24th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x I agree with Maecherie. I know how you feel having this happen, quite sad. Overall *thumbs up*
On March 24th 2008 Maecherie Said :
Maecherie It's always better when your world is at peace, and there isn't anymore yelling. Sure you feel you did something wrong. Of course you didn't, your father was just weak and couldn't handle it. I'm sure you know it now.