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kissing language |
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mkay..im sorrry lord! CAN YOU FORGIVE ME???!?!?! |
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hahahahahahahaaha mkay so this is number 28! |
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ch 28? |
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ch 26 |
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ch 25 |
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chp 23 |
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srry bout that 20-24 as i promised |
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ch9-24 on the store |
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store chapter 8 |
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the store part three |
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the store part 2 |
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the store |
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pert three. the house |
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ok a lil more boring......The haircut |
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hehehehehehe the morning |
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pert three. the house
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…..I walked thru the door and had sex with Joanna. She was diagnosed pregnant and I never saw her again……HAHAHAHAHHHAHAH JK JK JK JK JK. Hehehe I’m just fucking with u guys.
LoL I would never put such a lame ending.
RaWr ok so it was 3:57. And I was standing on the driveway. I saw Joanna look out the window and she waved and opened the door for me to come in. I kept staring at her car. The bright, blood red crossfire. How could she afford something like that? Does she have a second job or does Louie pay her more than anyone else?? I was searching through all the explanations she could have such a sweet car!! I walked across her freshly mowed lawn and stepped on her porch. I said hi and walked in. I looked around her house. It was about the same size as my house is now. 1 bathroom, 2 bedrooms, 1 kitchen, a basement, and a living room.
‘welcome to my house. Would u like anything to drink before we get started.’ ‘no thank you’ ‘are you sure I’ve got some mountain dew I’ve been trying to clean out of my fridge since forever’ ‘ok ill have one’
It was pretty good mountain dew. But ive had better. Her house was draped in red curtains and red couches, red chairs, red red red. She must really like the color red.
‘come over here I want to show you something’ ‘ok’
I walked into her kitchen and saw her in front of a mini version of the big kitchen at the china grove. it was pretty cool but I didn’t want to work cause I just had gotten out.
‘your hair looked better long’ ‘I know but what pops says, goes’ ‘how long was your hair?’ ‘if you could hold it straight about 7 inches’ ‘wow that’s long’ yeah I was making it grow long so that way I could donate it to the American red cross.’ I was serious. It was no lie I had my hair grown out to give to the bald people in different countries who want to feel hair. It takes a bunch of time off my community service hours for school anyway. I donated enough hair to get 1 hour out of 4 hours of community service out of my way. Our school is really weird. We also have to get a job shadow, be employed, be successful in some way even if the average gain is only like 5 dollars. Yeah its school stuff u can ask me if u have any questions bout it.
‘well at least now you wont have to wear a hairnet while working’ ‘yea that makes me work an extra couple of seconds’ ‘hahaha’ I was beginning to wonder if this was her usual self or if she was just being nice to me since I’m a younger than her. ‘so what did you call me here for’ ‘I wanted you to show me your secret to making the pancakes’ ‘uuh I don’t need to show you. You just gotta think like a kid. Kids want to eat what they think looks good.’ ‘so in other words?’ ‘make your food the way kids would want to eat it. You know if a kid sees and octopus all cut up on his plate hes not gonna eat it, but if you make that octopus a hamburger shape or slip it into a hamburger, the kid will eat it.’ ‘oh kids don’t like seeing stuff that’s disgusting.’ ‘yup’ ‘wow I just follow what Louie says to do’ ‘so do I’ we both laughed. We were having a nice conversation. And I thought that maybe that’s all she wanted. But I was wrong.
‘so jesse have you ever woken up early for something other than work’ ‘no hahaha’ ‘haha well how about every Monday when school starts, ill come pick you up and take you here and me and you can cook and have fun talking with me? You might even get to make some food for my kids!’ ‘ok whatever is okay with you’
I was thinking that she was way too young to have kids. She was only 22. Either she had kids had a young age or she adopted. Well either way it would be nice not to have to ride the bus every Monday morning, I could just get a ride from Joanna. ‘can I drive you home?’ ‘YES!’ ‘haha you saw my car didn’t you?’ “YES!’ ‘ok then’
We stepped out to her car. She unlocked it and I opened the passenger door. I looked and saw what looked to be a mess but was actually a very disorganized stack of cd’s. there were a bunch in the back three seats of the car. I looked and all the artist names were together in one pile and then another pile had a different artist and so on and so on. She had a bunch of eminem though……. Hes kewl. But I still prefer rock over rap. ’sorry for the mess but I don’t have anymore room in the house to store all these cd’s.’ ‘its alright.’ I looked at the cd stacks as she started the car up. I saw a stack of cd’s that stood out. The artist was Breaking Benjamin. I only listened to them a few times cause my friends at school listen to them most of the time. ‘ hey do you think I can borrow one of these?’ ‘ oh sure jess. Oh breaking Benjamin? I have a double of their ‘we are not alone’ album so you can keep it’ ‘thx’
We turned onto the road to my house(not gonna say), and we pulled into the driveway. My dog, chase, barked. I walked out and thanked her for the ride. I waved bye and waved back and she pulled out. I opened the door and walked to my room as always. It looked the same as I had left it. I looked in a mirror. Man that was weird haircut. I was so used to my hair being long I almost forgot how I looked with short hair. But then I looked at the pictures on my wall and I remembered. I was 14 years old looking like I was ten I cheked the time. It was 7 o’clock. I walked back to the kitchen, opened the fridge and pulled out some mountain dew, and drank it all. Sat down on the bottom bunk of my bunk bed and did about two puzzles of SUDOKU!! Yeah I’m easily bored. I turned on my lab top and yawned because the internet takes forever. I went on myspace. Only new messages and a photo comment. I was bout to fall asleep. Then I gotta message from one of my friends, scott. He asked where I was today. I checked my cell and it had like three new messages and two texts. I looked at the time and it was almost 10. I looked out my window and saw the clouds were turning black. I walked outside and held my hand out. It was raining. I love the rain and snow. I looked up and took a 5-minute nap. I walked back in my room and thought about the day. I sat in front of my comp. I stared and daydreamed…..then a thought cam to me……. I remembered something……I needed to clean my room. I did. I did that promise and while I was putting all 7000 of my shirts away, a thought occurred to me. I should write this all down some where. (I gotta stop starting sentences with the word ’I’ all the time.) The time was 10:46. The date was 7-9-07. My watch said it was 3:47 in London….I was getting bored. I finally turned of the lights to my room and sat in front my lap top. I started writing. What I was writing at first I forget. But I know I wrote this, I woke up to the sound of birds chirping and my alarm clock telling me to wake up……….
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| On September 24th 2007 kcbsdjchfbusgd Said : | |
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lollololoolololollololo y am i so boring to put an beginnin lika dat. ^>^ JEW(ISH EMO SHTUFFFFFF!!!
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| On July 17th 2007 LostSoul1121 Said : | |
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lol...nice begining...great story....i got lost a little though...at the ending...im easily lost...great story....did i already type that? O well it the truth |


