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A familiar voice. |
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Diary of a rape victim 5 |
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Raped! Chapter 35 (The End) |
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His bestfriend 3 |
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Raped! Chapter 27
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"Robert you know your not......"
The doctor stopped her midsentence.
"Who would you rather have operate on her me or some stranger?" He asked in a tone that told her to be quiet before any of the other faculty heard here.
"I'm sorry Rebecca but you can't be in here until we are done."
"I wunna see her." She said in a pleading tone.
"Im sorry I can't let you do that until we are done. How did you find this room anyway?" He asked.
"I ran around the whole hospital and yelled and screamed until someone told me where she was."
"They haven't kicked you off the premisses yet?"
"No they could try but you know me I wouldn't leave unless they sadated me."
"Yea that's true but I have to have you go to the waiting room until we are done. It shouldn't be much longer."
"Ok." She left hesitantly
The doctor started to stich Francine back up to start the transfusion. He had to give Francine a total of 96 stitches. I took longer than expected and he was afraid that if he didn't get the blood in her soon he would lose her again. When the stitches were in. He started the transfusion he put both bags of blood into Francines small body. There was a problem it wasn't enough. They needed more blood and quick. Francines seemed like she was fading again.
"Hurry go to the blood bank and get 2 more bags and fast." He barked the order at the nurse.
She ran out as fast as she could to try and get the blood. It was too late Francine had flat lined again.
"Why are you doing this to me?" He asked God in anger
"Hurry up and charge up the machine now." He demanded the assistant
The man went to the machine and charged it up. When it was ready the doctor said,
"1,2,3 Clear."
He placed the paddles onto Francine's chest and shockked her. It was a sucess.
"Ha Ha Ha thats my girl. She has 9 lives." He said overjoyed.
Just then the nurse came back in with the blood. The doctor started giving Francine's small body the blood it needed to survive. He didnt use the full two bags all he needed was one and a quarter. It seemd that the surgery was a sucess. Francine was going to survive. The docotr sent her to recovery and walked out of the room to talk to her mother.
"Rebecca?"
"Yes?"
"I think she is going to make it." He said with satisfaction.
"Can I see her now?" She asked with impatientness.
"Not yet. She needs to be observed in the recovery unit for awhile."
"Ok." She said with dissapointment
"I'm sorry." He said with a tear in his eye. "I know you want to see her."
"It's not your fault. Thank you for saving her." She siad gratfully
" Your welcome." He replied ina sincere tone.
"When did you get back to town? How come you never told me you were back?"
"Well me and you weren't talking when I left so I figured you wouldn't want anything to do with me."
"I mean Robert you stole from me but you are still my brother. I know you needed the money but I don't know why. I mean your a doctor."
"Yea but you know I have a gambling problem."
"I know did you quit?"
"Yes that's why I am back."
"Thats good."
"Do you think we can make amends?" He asked in a scared of the answer tone.
"I think we can."
"Thats great." He said with excitment.
He saved his neice and made up with his sister all in one night. He was happy he felt accomplised. He knew why he came back. Something inside him told him he was needed home. He just didn't know why. Tonight he finally figured it out.
"I will let you see her when she is out." He told Francines mother.
"Thank you." She replied
The doctor turned around and walked out of the room to check on Francine again.
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| On July 28th 2008 wannahug13 Said : | |
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if they dont know about a family member operating on family, they wont get arrested. DUH!! |
| On January 25th 2008 demonica666 Said : | |
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its true what Aleera00 says by law if a doctor operates on a ER patient that they can be arrested. |
| On January 25th 2008 Froggz16 Said : | |
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kmp, plz
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| On January 25th 2008 Crazymisskaz Said : | |
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yay:) |
| On January 25th 2008 DaKay Said : | |
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Omg yay =] kmp! |
| On January 24th 2008 Talldude1012 Said : | |
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yea its pretty good. but i think it could be much better if you fix the mistakes. What makes the story its best is when you make it run smoothly. |
| On January 24th 2008 Aleera00 Said : | |
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No offense meant but whenever you are writing something in the modern world, you NEED to check everything. One of my friends who is only 14 but is an amazing writer, (I think she has almost as much talent at writing as Anne Rice does.) she lives in Australia but has written on a story about two cops in New York, she checks with everything, she was describing a hotel room and decided to look up what hotel rooms in New York look like, as surprising as it may sound, they look exactly the same as they do in Australia. But you get my drift, check everything. |
| On January 24th 2008 Aleera00 Said : | |
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Just so you know, doctors NEVER operate on their own family, no matter what. My Aunt is in fact a doctor, that's why I know. |
| On January 24th 2008 angiegymgurl Said : | |
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YAY!!!!! she lives! woot woot....still tho damn perverts for raping her and then shooting her! fucking bastards! KMP |
| On January 24th 2008 codeme Said : | |
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kool im glad sshes gonna make make it ^^ kmp |
| On January 23rd 2008 Crosspiano Said : | |
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whoa...I am gonna puke if her line goes flat again! lol good job pkmp |
| On January 23rd 2008 sarah101106 Said : | |
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that many stiches huh? for a gunshot :( hmmm kmp |
| On January 23rd 2008 emorocker2198 Said : | |
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plz plz plz plz plz plz keep me posted. |
| On January 23rd 2008 bloodyness6969 Said : | |
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kmp! i like this! |
| On January 23rd 2008 ambersunset Said : | |
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=D really good story! kmp please. |
| On January 23rd 2008 lovelynatwolff Said : | |
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KMP
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| On January 23rd 2008 groupielove Said : | |
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yeah she lives! pooor thang. keep me posted. thanks |
| On January 23rd 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said : | |
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That's great! She's Gonna live YAY! Please keep me posted. |
| On January 23rd 2008 Equasha Said : | |
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hey plz,plz keep me posted! |


