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Drama Created on 1-18-08 Views(310) Story Rating G

 When Francine's mother got to the hospital, She ran in as fast as her legs would carry her. She ran up to the emergency room counter and demanded to see Francine.

"Where is my daughter?" She said frantically

"Calm down ma'am." Said the nurse trying to settle her down

"Where is she?" She demanded again

"Who is your daughter ma'am?" Asked the nurse

"Francine Jones." Her mother replied

"Hold on let me check my computer to see if she is here."

 The nurse searched the computer and found no file on Francine. Then again there wouldn't be because she wasn't registered she was brought in by ambulence and she had no form of i.d on her.

"She isn't in our system ma'am." The nurse said.

"What do you mean she isn't on your system?" Francine's mother said in complete anger.

"Our records don't show she was admitted here."

"She was brought here in an ambulence."

"There was a girl brought in here by ambulence but you have to prove it is your daughter."

"How the hell am I supposed to that?" She asked the nurse

"I don't know describe her."

"Well she is 14. She has brown hair and eyes. She is very petite. She only weighs 87lbs." Francine's mother described

"That sounds alot like the girl who was brought in but thats not enough."

 Francine's mother was hot with anger. She was long past annoyed.

"What the hell do you mean thats not enough?" She demanded

"We need more information we can't let you back there not knowing if it's really your daughter. You have to understand it policy."

"You can take your policy and shove it up your ass for all I care. I want to see my kid and I want to see her now." She said in a fit of rage.

"I'm sorry ma'am I can't let you back there. If you don't settle down I am going to have to ask you to leave the hospital facility."

 Francine's mother didn't want to leave. She stood there for about a minute or two. For her it seemed like an eternity trying to figure out how else she could prove Francine was her daughter. Then she thought about how Heather told her that some men in a van had took her and Francine.

"She was with some men in a van and I was at the police station reporting her kidnapped by some men who were in a van. Then I heard over the c.b radio at the police station that a teenaged girl was shot and threw out of a maroon colored van." She said to the nurse

 Since those details were not reported at the police station nor to reporters the nurse knew Francine's mother was who she said she was.

"Ok ma'am that is good enough. Let me see if they will let you back there. She isn't in good shape. I think she is in the operating room. You are not allowed back there until they are finished." She told Mrs. Jones in a disappointed tone.

"Please hurry and let me know what is going on."

"I will ma'am I will be right back ok?"

"Ok." Replied Francine's mother

 The nurse went back into the emergency wing to see if Francine was still in surgery. Just Mrs. Jones' luck she was. The nurse walked back to Francine's mother to tell her what was going on.

"I'm sorry ma'am she is still in Surgery I am going to have to have you wait in the family waiting area."

"Ok please let me know when I can go see my baby ok?"

"Ok ma'am I will that will be no problem. I will let you know the second she is out of surgery."

"Ok thank you so much." She said in a thankful tone

"Your welcome ma'me." The nurse feeling bad for Mrs. Jones having to go through this hell.

 She wished there was something she could do to help her but there was nothing. Francine's mother headed towards the Family Waiting Area of the hospital with her head down exhausted and heartbroken. All she could do was pray Francine made it out of this alive.

  Meanwhile the doctor was trying to revive Francine with no luck.

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wannahug13 are the guys arrested yet?
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On January 19th 2008 Crosspiano Said :
Crosspiano hurry!!!!!!!!! make the next chapter! I neeeeed it! lol
On January 19th 2008 bloodyness6969 Said :
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this is a good story so far... it kept my interest for the most part, but you had to read into it. for a good story, you should read the first paragraph and not want to stop. but it is good. KMP please
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On January 18th 2008 Equasha Said :
Equasha uh hello? i said 2 PLZ keep me posted so PLZ plZ Keep me posted this time(sorry if i sound rude but ur story is so gud i don't want to miss anything)
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PunkRockNerdxX Please keep me posted. Awesome story. I hope Francine stays alive.
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