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Raped! Chapter 24

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 Francines naked bloody body lay on the side of the road. The officers noticed that they had threw her out. They came to a sudden stop and turned around. They were desperatly trying to get to Francine before it was too late. When they found her body they radioed for help.

"We need an emergency vehicle on route 6 as soon as possible. The victim appears to be shot."

 The officers were applying pressure to francines wound trying to make it stop bleeding. It was no use she was slipping away fast. The ambulance finally showed up. The placed Francine on a gurney and placed her carefully into the ambulance. They covered her naked body with a blanket. They also hooked up an Iv and tried to find out where she was bleeding from. They arrived at the hospital 10 minutes later. They rushed her into the emergency unit. The doctor realized Francine was shot in the stomach. Francine's pulse was getting weak.

"She needs to be operated on. Hurry take her to the nearest available operating room. Her pulse is getting weaker if we don't operate fast we will lose her." Said the doctor in a panic

 The doctor looked at Francine and said,

"Hold on don't let go. We will save you just hang in there."

 Francine was desperatly trying to hold on she felt her life slipping right out of her body. She was so weak and in so much pain. The doctor gave her a shot of morphine and Francine felt a little relieve. She had a bullet in her stomach and was losing blood fast.

"I'm going to die. I'm going to die." was all she kept repeating

"No your not hang in there." The doctor said in a reassuring voice.

 Francine knew he wasn't going to be able to save her.

"I didn't even get to tell anyone goodbye." she thought to herself.

 She was still unaware of the fact she had been raped. She must have blacked out during the whole ordeal. She didn't even realize she was naked. All she was aware of is that she had been shot and was in a massive amount of pain. They finally got to the operating room. The doctor gave her anestetics to put her to sleep. Once she was asleep he bagan to operate. He cut open her stomach and tried to find the bullet. There was to much blood for him to see. He hooked up Francine to a machine that sucked the blood out of the way of the doctors sight.

 From the loss of blood Francine started to slip away even more rapidly. The doctor worked desperatly to try to save her. It was no use Francine was gone. Her heart stopped beating.

"We are not going to give up." The doctor screamed at the nurses and other assistants.

"She is to young to die. She doesn't deserve this."

 Tears started to form behind the doctors eyes. He felt like he failed but he was still determined to save her. He wasn't giving up no matter what it took. Francines body started to get cold and stiff. The doctor was going to try and revive her. Meanwhile her body lie dead on the operating table.

 Francine's mother was starting to panick. She got in her van and headed down to the police station.

"I would like to report my daughter as kidnapped." Francines mother said heartbroken.

"What is her name ma'am? asked the officer

"Francine Jones." Her mother replied

"Do you know who took your daughter ma'am?"

"No." She replied

 The officer had her c.b on and over the speaker Francine' moter heard the officer talking about Francine.

"We have a 14 year old teenager we have just escorted to the hospital. She was thrown out of a maroon colored van. She appeared to be shot and raped."

 Francine's mother fell to her knees. She started to break out into tears. It took her a minute to pull herself together. When she got back her composure she ran as fast as she could to her van. She started it up and drove away as fast as she could towards the hospital.

"I'm coming Francine, I'm coming." She kept screaming as she drove the 5 miles to the hospital. Little did her mom know she was too late.

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On July 28th 2008 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 nooooo... she cant die!
On January 25th 2008 Crazymisskaz Said :
Crazymisskaz noooo she cant die, she needs to come back and kick those guys buts in a cool kung fu style fashion, when are u getting your stories published?
On January 23rd 2008 musiclover2050 Said :
musiclover2050 kmp please
On January 21st 2008 codeme Said :
codeme also to awnser Aleera00 question it was so they dont get caught by her telling them waat they looked like. OMG NOOOO YYYYYY!!!
On January 18th 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 i have a single answer for Aleera00's question they're idiots hello!!!!!oh but dis is sad as fuck!!
On January 17th 2008 ambersunset Said :
ambersunset OMG! thats sad. D= keep me posted please
On January 17th 2008 Aleera00 Said :
Aleera00 I have a single question... why did the men shoot Francine? There was no point.
On January 17th 2008 lequime Said :
lequime sniff, you should get it published....itll be a big seller, so sad! anyways happy endings are really getting old, i think you should kep it this way
On January 17th 2008 CGS4LyF3 Said :
CGS4LyF3 I LOVE YOUR STORY ITS SO GOOD .. PLEASE DONT LET HER DIE .. OMG WRITE MORE .. NOW!! LOL =] .. KMP
On January 16th 2008 lovelynatwolff Said :
lovelynatwolff I'm sick and i just woke up...now im half crying...:( poor francine. THAT IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD KMP
On January 16th 2008 Crosspiano Said :
Crosspiano wow! u did twist it up a bit
On January 16th 2008 Trinie13 Said :
Trinie13 omg! but shes not gonna die is she? you already wrote an intro 2 another story about her.
On January 16th 2008 Crazycutie7 Said :
Crazycutie7 omg!
On January 16th 2008 emorocker2198 Said :
emorocker2198 no shes not aloud to die!!!NO!! plz plz plz keep me posted
On January 16th 2008 DaKay Said :
DaKay OH MY GOSHH!! =[[ KMP!
On January 16th 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said :
PunkRockNerdxX Francine better come back to life. SHE CAN'T DIE!!! YOU HEAR ME SHE CAN'T!!! Please keep me posted.
On January 16th 2008 dancerbabe16 Said :
dancerbabe16 kmp =]
On January 16th 2008 kg108551 Said :
kg108551 OMG!! kmp
On January 16th 2008 Equasha Said :
Equasha ok so how is she dying and u were about 2 write a story about her life after the rape i figured it out she's not going to die plz keep me posted
On January 16th 2008 firerocket67 Said :
firerocket67 omg, if you let her die, I'm going to be pissed and won't read any more of your stories I swear! DON'T DIE FRANCINE HOLD ON! KMP
On January 16th 2008 sarah101106 Said :
sarah101106 lol pkmp
On January 16th 2008 DemonzR4eva Said :
DemonzR4eva omgOSH SHE SO CANT DIE.... SHE IS WAYYYYY TO AWESOME TO DIE SHIT MAN IM CRYING NOW FUC!!!!!!!
On January 16th 2008 angiegymgurl Said :
angiegymgurl oh shet!please let her live!create a good ending please!!!=[ BTW its really good kmp
On January 16th 2008 KibaFanatic Said :
KibaFanatic NOO!!! WHATEVER HAPPENED TO MAIN CHARACTERS' INVINCIBILITY!?!?!?
On January 16th 2008 mistdarklight Said :
mistdarklight kmp