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Raped! Chapter 21

Drama Created on 1-15-08 Views(323) Story Rating G

 Back at the hotel Francine looked around the room. The walls had brown and white stripped wallpaper with tears in it. The walls had colored pictures on it. Probably from some kid who was staying there with their parents. It was a run down motel room. There was a big purple stain on the carpet, possibly from a bottle of wine or some other drink. Francine felt so dirty being in that motel room. There was no telephone or a television set. You can tell the room was cheap. She didn't know the name of the motel she didn't get a chance to look.

 The men lifted her up and threw her on the bed. Francine didn't even yell. She figured its not going to help so what is the point. Leo held her down while the 5th man Francine refered to as Sneaky because of his attitude grabbed the rope and started to tie Francine hands to the head board of the bed. Francine wanted to be sick when she smelt the scent of the bed it smelt like stale beer, moldy pizza and bad b.o. She could tell the bedding wasn't washed in awhile. She thought to herself I wonder why this place hasnt been condemed.

 The men proceeded to undress Francine.

"Leave me the hell alone you pervs."

 She yelled as loud as she could. The men were upset that she had yelled so loudly. She yelled so loud in hopes someone would hear her, Sounded like she screamed into a megaphone.

"Shut up you stupid little......."

 Before he could finish his sentence the door swung open. The latin man was just about to put the rag in her mouth until he heard the door swing open. He turned around and there he saw them. People who Francine was more than happy to see.

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On July 28th 2008 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 YAY!!!!
On January 18th 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 thank God somebodii came!Oh sorry i didnt read earlier my comp was fuckin up do yeah im readin da next ones =]
On January 17th 2008 ambersunset Said :
ambersunset good.
On January 15th 2008 emorocker2198 Said :
emorocker2198 short idc its good
On January 15th 2008 lovelynatwolff Said :
lovelynatwolff *snort* WRITE 22 SOON
On January 15th 2008 Equasha Said :
Equasha ok plz try to keep me posted and really gud 4 it being so short
On January 15th 2008 Crosspiano Said :
Crosspiano yay! I loove it! kmp
On January 15th 2008 dancerbabe16 Said :
dancerbabe16 ahh, kmp! =]
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mistdarklight kmp please!! KMP
On January 15th 2008 ALOFAINA Said :
ALOFAINA love it..kmp
On January 15th 2008 sarah101106 Said :
sarah101106 r they joinimg in on the fun? poor girl...pkmp
On January 15th 2008 groupielove Said :
groupielove That was cool please keep me posted!
On January 15th 2008 justlikeme1569 Said :
justlikeme1569 sorry its so short that was actually supposed to go with chapter 20! The next one will be longer.