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Raped! Chapter 11

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 It was going on nine o clock so they had to go outside and meet Sarah and Amanda's parents. They didn't want to go out to soon just in case the men had a plan. Of course they didn't know that they did. They decided they would wait until about 2 of 9 before they went outside. Amanda's and Sarah's parents were normally on time. Francines on the other hand were always late. It was time to go out and wait for their parents. Sure enough when they went outside Amanda's and Sarah's parents were there. Amanda and Sarah jumped into their parents car as fast as possible. With Sarah and Amanda safe Francine felt better. It was down to Heather and Francine. Still with no idea in plan to keep Heather safe Francine was still scared. They went back into the club.

"Heather can I use your phone?"

"Yea here it is."

"Thanks."

"No prob."

 When Francine asked to use Heathers phone the men were watching from around the corner. Francine unaware of where the men were didn't know they were in eyesight but from the feeling she got from them she should have known better. Francine was in the process of dialing her parents number when the 4th man came from around the corner.He was a rather tall ugly man with bad acne. He had brown hair and brown eyes.He came up behind Francine and grabbed Heathers cell phone.

"Big mistake little miss. Who you trying to call?" He asked.

"None of your buisness if I wanted you to know i would have told you. Now wouldn't I?

"Your lucky I don't smack you right across your face."

"Oh am I now go ahead and do it big man. You wouldn't be the 1st and I'm sure you wouldn't be the last." She said with a smirk.

"That would be to easy now wouldn't it?"

"How am I supposed to know your the bad one here remember not me. I never went up to someone and said hey there I'm gonna rape you by the way your really pretty. Why dont you dumbasses just leave us alone now and go out on the corner and find yourselves some whores. Wouldnt that be easier or are you guys broke and can't afford one?"

"Just shut up you little bitch we will do as we please."

"Right because you think you have strength in numbers so it takes 5 of your sorry asses to come up with a dumbass plan. So you think there is 5 of you your untouchable right? Well newsflash there buddy your not."

 She said patting him on the shoulder. Now it was down to Francine and Heather and no phone. Francine and Heather had no money to use a payphone and Francines parents dont except collect calls. So with no phone and an hour and a half until Francines parents come to get them they have to somehow get through it and pray that her parents show up on time so they could get the hell out of there. Little did Francine and Heather know Francine's hunch that her parents were going to be late like always was a bulls eye. The one night Francine really needed her parents to be on time they weren't going to show up.

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On July 27th 2008 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 lol bad parenting can leave your child raped in a club. so sad.
On January 25th 2008 Crazymisskaz Said :
Crazymisskaz noooooooo
On January 12th 2008 Aradae Said :
Aradae It is a good story, but honestly, if I knew something awful was about to happen to my friends and/or me, I would have told Amanda or Sarah's parents what was going on. I do look forward to reading the rest though.
On January 8th 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 oooooooooooooh shiznit
On January 6th 2008 emorocker2198 Said :
emorocker2198 the parents suck.kmp
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mistdarklight about to read the next chapter.. omfg reli wanna kno wot happens
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PunkRockNerdxX Please keep me posted. Great story so far.
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Grammatical errors, but over all decent story!
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DaKay Oh my goshhh. Let me know when you post the next one =]
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