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it couldn’t been real, could it?

Creative Created on 7-28-08 Views(112) Story Rating G

I feel like I can’t breathe – for this air is too thick


I can not stand – for my legs are numb


I can not talk – for I am speechless

my brain just does not except what happened

for it couldn’t been real, could it?



It all started at that stupid party.

“You’re coming to my party, right?” asked Carla “of course” I replied, if only I said no – but how was I meant to know what was going to happen.

I put on my black dress, my blue hair extensions and my makeup – for once I looked pretty; just trying to fit in. I was so tired of being deferent; I just wanted to know how it felt to be them.  

 

“Jess, is that you?” Carla asked “ha-ha very funny Carla of cause it’s me” I replied. “Jess, let me introduce u to my older brother Brendan” Brendan seemed pretty nice, I didn’t know anyone at Carla’s party – so I hanged around Brendan.

Carla my best friend for 8 years now, - not sure why she hangs around me; everyone says I’m a freak – I guess that’s just true.

As the night went on boredom got me drinking- and Brendan seemed to get nicer and nicer.  

My first mistake for leaving the party with Brendan – My second mistake was drinking; my third mistake was trusting a stranger; even though he was Carla’s Brother.

We stoped by a park, and from the moment on everything went wrong….

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On August 22nd 2008 OpenDay Said :
OpenDay jet always does that
On August 17th 2008 Dragonwing999 Said :
Dragonwing999 I'm on the edge of my seat here & you cut me off. How dare you.
On August 13th 2008 Foreverlyn Said :
Foreverlyn I love the detail...and the end..
On July 28th 2008 jabip15 Said :
jabip15 oh i wanna know what happens!!!! KMp plz :{]