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He was happy till she walked pass - the ending

Creative Created on 7-21-08 Views(126) Story Rating G

He feel sorry for Jess, Jess had no one in the word she was always alone- Her parents where never there.


Justin started walking to Jess’s home thinking about how he was going to apologise, for you see Justin and Katy were not lovers they were cousins, it was all just pretended, Justin just wanted ravage.


When he got there the door was open; so he let himself in – straight to Jess’s room he went.


What he saw horrified him, she lay on the ground her wrists were bleeding. Oh no what has she done – she had committed suicide.  

The letter she left behind:


I lost my parents when I was 6; I haven’t seen them for years.
I’ve lost the one person on the earth that noticed me, the one person that cared.
I got nothing to live for,

School sucks; I’m almost failing everything
work sucks; only at the age of 16 and already I work 7 hours of day,
6 hours at school, 7 at work – I never seem to get any peace.

I made a mistake; I hurt him bad – but not as much as I hurt myself,
so I say goodbye – I bet no one will even notice I’m gone.

Maybe now ill finally get to rest.

 

A teenage suicide the cops didn’t care much, Justin feel broken – now Jess will never know how much he loved her.


No one knew Jess better then me, and no one on this earth loved her more then I.


For I am Justin and I loved her,

 


R.I.P my love

 

 

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On November 16th 2008 MasterDylmo Said :
MasterDylmo nooooooooooooooooooo FUCK u get me crying everytime i read ur stuff! i love a sad ending, its good to feel like shit once in a while
On August 22nd 2008 OpenDay Said :
OpenDay ITS ALWAYS A SAD ENDING
On July 21st 2008 XoLOLAXo Said :
XoLOLAXo awww..what a sad ending...
On July 21st 2008 RJbork09 Said :
RJbork09 aww
On July 21st 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess awww
On July 21st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Oh my goshh it make me cryyy!!! Awwwwww!!! It happens sometimes.
On July 21st 2008 Kidojidoari Said :
Kidojidoari I like the way it ended. :0 Twas good. ^^ and really sad...