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He was happy till she walked pass part 2

Creative Created on 7-17-08 Views(157) Story Rating G

There he stood with all his friends, she walked pass watching and wondering if he would smile back – like he always did. But not this time, this time he ignored her, this time she was invisible to him.

That hurt so much; it cut her deep for the guy she loved didn’t love here back anymore. What was she going to do – she just wasn’t sure. What was there to do? - Her mind would not work.

 

So she tried to apologies, but he walked away. But she couldn’t give up hope; hope was the only thing she had left.  She knew he loved her, she knew she loved him; she believed she could have a happy ending, but the thing is life isn’t a fairytale.


She was willing to do anything to regain his trust to regain the feeling they once feel. – So she told him that. But still he ignored her; it just wasn’t going to work.


He wrote in his diary:


What am I meant to do, I can not forgive her for she has hurt me bad, but I love her I really do, but why did she do it?  - Especial with my best friend. I love her, I really do but every time I see her it reminds me of the pain I went through. She has hurt me; she has hurt me deep I don’t know how to forgive. 

 

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On August 22nd 2008 OpenDay Said :
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On August 8th 2008 MissCheerCap Said :
MissCheerCap triple love this story
On July 17th 2008 XoLOLAXo Said :
XoLOLAXo kmpp!
On July 17th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess well try the whole forgive but dont forget. if he spends time with her maybe he will realize that she IS good and that she wont do that anymore. please keep me posted!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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